Going Back to Roots – Having Fun While Writing.

Forewyrd:
The Censorious side of me has been clamouring for the time and space to write another politically polemical post. My Creative Fiction writing side has pointed out that it was here first, lots of other folk with a wider readership and more attention to typos and syntax are already producing worthy political work….The Creative Fiction side continued by adding it had been very, very patient but now that this project is starting to show momentum and velocity ‘Let’s talk some more about writing already’ (without being introspective and angst ridden that is).
So just for Snorts and Giggles (This is a Family Friendly Blog) let me introduce you to the characters (thus far) and plot (developing). Much modified from original outline from January of last year
On Outlining A New Writing Venture (A post with no reason other than I was having fun with it)

In the rugged northern princedom of Daingneach, ambitious and fearless prince Iarann
in order to forge an alliance with southern neighbour the pliable, insecure Prince Renommiert of Vorsichtig

has ordered his loyal younger cousin Vulstrum
into an arranged marriage with Lady Loryana,

the scholarly youngest daughter of a minor noble house in Vorsichtig

This is having tragic consequences as for some time Vulstrum has loved and been loved in return by Lady Auroreya
fayre daughter of a minor noble of Daingneach who on being given the news of the imposed ending of their romance falls to a wretched state.

This turn of events has caused concern and anger in her dearest friend, confidante and cousin,  Jerial
stalwart and loyal servant, messenger, scout and sometime skirmisher to her house of Dristrig and land Daingneach. Jerial has a known link to that enigmatic and variable elemental force of Nature. The Ethereal
which her family prefer not to talk about in the hope this facet will fade into her background and become a mere minor useful quirk of her character.

Meanwhile Loryhana awaiting her fate with reticence seeks solace in her studies of Mathematics

And mopes over her imagined fate as a bride

Unaware of the resulting resonances with the Ethereal are by cause and effect drawing Jerial to her, down unknown paths.

Their inadvertent meeting will send them down a shared Ethereal path and other journeys of exploration and flight. Loryhana’s disappearance will disrupt Iarann’s strategies, Renommiert’s hopes and have repercussions within the two princedoms and neighbouring lands, already in tense and volatile situations.

The next post will be an introduction to the various territories, other influential characters or agencies and the complex web of motivations. These will be the backdrops which Jerial and Loryhana have to navigate on the quests and challenges which evolve as they journey.

The World Heaves a Sigh of Relief. All of the World?

The news is….. Good? Well apparently The World is heaving sighs of relief now that Pakistan has given Trump and Get Out of Jail Free card (he does collect them doesn’t he?) over Iran. We should all be glad for the ordinary Iranians who were not supplied with any sort of preparatory Civil Defence of any note by its own Government.
Except The However will kick in…

Lebanon (2026 only)

1500 dead since Israel and Hezbollah went to war over Iran. No ceasefire there either. The War goes on. No end in sight.

Sudan 2023-2026

At the last count the death to alone was 150,000. That does not include the injured, nor the victims who survived atrocities. When was the last march protesting about that one? Peace talks? Basically, aside from charities, humanitarian agencies  and the efforts of news outlets…is anyone listening out there?

Ukraine 2022-2026
The war that united sections of The European Far Left and En bloc The American Far Right. ‘It was not Russia’s fault. They had no choice’. To ‘defend’ Russian soil against the Ukrainian Army a pre-emptive invasion started in 2022 . The war still goes on. Ukrainian civilian death toll 15,000 + Since Russia usually play a very long game – no sign of anything like serious peace talks. One plus for the Ukrainian Government is that Trump and Tucker Carlson seem to have lost interest. And so have the bots and European Moscowophiles who used to infect any Facebook charity appeals.

Palestine / Israel (2023-2026)

75,000+ Palestinian dead; 2000+ Israeli dead. Naturally the protesters were straight out of the starting blocks. And they did make a difference…..just not to the war that’s all.
One day some folk might get together and starting asking the hard questions ‘How did we get here’. Hard questions concerning a basic bloody fact in Human History….No one country, no one community, no one people have completely clean hands. And if you want to balanced answer you have to go back more than one thousand years, a lot more. If you are willing to accept some brutal answers; might spoil a few folks pre-conceived ideas though.

Conclusion

Those are but four of the 30 major conflicts taking place in the world, but look deeper and wider. Take the results on say
https://warwatch.ch/explore
And over the past two years you will find a far worse picture. Some may only affect hundreds of folk, but if you were one of those, then that is your whole world.
The world is in its usual current state. A conflict ridden place. As of mid-2025, there were nearly 42.5 million refugees globally, part of a total of 117.3 million people forcibly displaced, the latter figure takes into account those moved against their will internally.
So all that has happened is that folk in relatively comfortable environments can stop being frightened by some fellow ill-suited to the post of leader of a large nation; he is not going to start a nuclear war this week. (And we can thank Pakistan for that). Otherwise the misery goes on. The Iranians might stop being killed by US and Israeli ordinance, but they still have the same style of government with its brutal strong arm militia on hand, and their nation is in ruins, they might sigh with relief today, but then there will be their tomorrow.

Globally. Nothing to cheer or feel relieved about.
The misery goes on around the world.

After Some Time. A Storyline Which Might Work -A Very Cautious Announcement

Forewyrd: It says much about the subject matter and the mindset of the writer when it takes about 4 months to try an encapsulate in a coherent, readable manner a post.
Thus having completed the introduction to The Introduction ……

This will be all about the evolution of the narrative of a projected book. I will try to keep this short and free of the internal drama which should be only the private lot of the writer.

Just to re-cap

Early 2025 
Determined to ‘this time’ write the book which had been nagging me for three or more years I examined all previous efforts, decided the basis was alright and set off breezily (6th Jan 2025)
https://writingwritingandmorewritinginspiteofcomputers.home.blog/2025/01/06/on-outlining-a-new-writing-venture-a-post-with-no-reason-other-than-i-was-having-fun-with-it/
A few days later there was even a justification for my approach, which was strong enough to stand an admission that things had gone wrong with earlier efforts
https://writingwritingandmorewritinginspiteofcomputers.home.blog/2025/01/21/incepto-ne-desistam-a-pantsers-motto/
And even an affirmation 30th March 2025 all was going very well indeed
https://writingwritingandmorewritinginspiteofcomputers.home.blog/2025/03/30/escape-velocity-has-been-achieved-and-craft-holding-another-chapter-in-a-very-irregular-series-about-one-persons-approach-to-writing/ 
And then?
Even the most dedicated of Pantsers should be able to know when the project might have words, lots of them, BUT no soul. That dread sterile time when The Not Knowing What’s Ahead is no longer anything to do with the cheerful abandon to the imagination to find a way out. The characters aren’t speaking and the writer has lost interest or belief in the narrative. 
It happens
Nevertheless the undefinable (and at times downright annoying) urge to continue stayed. Somehow. Somewhen. Somewhere, the book would be written.

There were two solid factors. An established world construction in two other series.The backdrop of a plot, being a young man of nobility is told to marry a young woman of nobility; his problem being the choice is not the one he has been very, very attached to. Which was going to lead to political ramifications.
These two basics would not go away, but the fruition and the expansion?….. No….. Just lots of withering. It seemed there would have to be more attention to plot and less to pantsing, which was very unfamiliar territory for me. But since at least two of the Muses were pestering me, along with my urge to write ‘Something’ yet the characters were just not speaking to me, radical choices had to be made.

Placement and Justification
Even Fantasy and SF books must have some link with reality, something the human reader can relate to and comprehend, otherwise they would be unreadable. Since my usual approach was not firing up my imagination, my next step was to look to History for a basis to work with, a place where the plots could grow. And within Fantasy and SF the military edge is often encountered, there would be a theme I was familiar with. Onwards then.   
Firstly a close look at a War will show there will be more than one cause; social, political, territorial. And all go into the mix, also with little histories of their own, those go back and back. Whenever you get to what you think is The Reason you should be asking ‘But Why That Reason?’ and back you go further. An example follows.

World War I. If you come across any work or any person that gives you just one reason; ditch it straight away. You can find links that go back to the Napoleonic wars and then some. Whereas it would not be wise to take up a large portion of a novel with complex back histories building a back drop which when a locally important event happened the cause and effect would draw in others far and wide. Thus the arranged marriage and what went wrong to impede; that would be the trigger.
Fantasy novels with a few heroic figures can be wonderous if handled by a writer with a skill and an art for Epic Drama, otherwise they can drift into parody, or become, well dull. Having a mix of folk with varying views and roles is one of those challenges. Avoid cliché characters, get the balance between numbers and memorable right, out of that some character’s actions and status will push them onto the central stage, but make sure they are as at least interesting as other characters with less time on page. Oh yes make sure they have a very good reason for being there; without being operatically heroic; what’s going on is not all about them. A few socially minor folks might start off being the pebbles which lead to an avalanche of a war but they should not really be the ones who stop it or change its course. Nothing wrong with seeing how they live through this time though. 
So there it was a template of cause and effect to draw parallels. I had previously these  used analogies twice, but they tended to be conveyances for the central characters to move along their own paths. What was need was to have the events taking on their own life and drawing the characters along. Let that be my guide then, and while doing so consider how other wars evolved. 

Plots and Pantsing

Planning out how a book would go has never worked for me. I tried it years back and used to end up effectively doodling because I could not see that far ahead. Pantsing would still have it’s place. This would be based on the much used and attributed phrase ‘No plan survives first contact with the enemy,’ Whereas battles and short campaigns might go as planned, political strategies have their time, and ambitions go so far. When it comes to to the medium to long term however, the variables and unforeseens have their say. These would take the form of writing at a slower pace, not looking to a target of words, getting to the end of a scene and then stopping to wait for an idea based on the ‘thus far’ to take root, maybe even an ‘Oh yeah. That would work’ and of course one of the characters having their say.
Therefore I have a conflict on the horizon, there are characters in place, there are differing agendas. What happens along the way remains to be seen. Nothing really innovative in long history of writing. I should have thought about it a few books back.   

Making Editing and Continuity Fun or Interesting
Unless you are gifted with the knack of planning out your work in terms of cast and plot there will be times when on reading back ‘thus far’ gaps or bumps in the rationale, continuity, logic and motivations will occur. These might involve, Time, Distance (Five hundred miles in a day- you’d better have some particularly good reason for that accomplishment). Character (why did they go mean or nice just ‘then’. Any previous indications they might?). Agency (How come that outfit is able to do what it did, just ‘then’ and more importantly ‘WHY’ . Just saying or implying all the time they are ‘evil’ or ‘good’ gets old).
I have found in this effort an entertaining and rewarding way is to take an historical research approach. Like this- in the progress of the narrative it seems a good time to have something take place ‘here’, but has currently flimsy evidence for the cause. Well maybe there is something missing from the ‘historical’ record. At this stage I refer back through the narrative, seek out a rational place and enter stronger evidence. This is mildly comparable with writers of histories trawling through historical records, previously overlooked or just uncovered which ‘sheds new light’. The important musts are:

The evidence makes perfect sense.
It fits neatly where it is entered.
The continuity between evidence and ‘event’ is solid.
The link does not contradict anything else going on. (It is recommended the link works in isolation from other threads until the ‘event’ occurs)

Outlook
Therefore with an outline as to what is taking place, against a larger backdrop, and characters set in place there is more confidence about this attempt. Exactly how it will turn out I cannot say. The fact of having only 43,000 + words after fifteen months does not discourage me, because they are built on solid footing. It would seem to me you cannot discard a whole section of 15,000 words with a ‘It can be better’ and strive on undeterred if the narrative was not showing promise and calling me on. Slowly though, a few characters are playing their cards very close to their chests. In my opinion a wise move, for the variables are myriad.

Onward then.

On Easter Sunday, Another Message of Hope

On the 24th March 2026 Mothers from both sides of the latest Israeli – Palestinian conflict marched barefoot in Rome for peace  

Mostly overlooked by the world media, fixing upon the latest conflicts in Iran and Lebanon, this march had more sincerity and depth than all of the fashionable events which took place in Western World since October 2022.
Here we witness a true reason to have Hope that in some sections of Humanity there are those willing to Unite in a positive manner.
Let all of us who truly care about suffering throughout the world celebrate this event and look to these Women for inspiration.

For those suffering through war, communal violence, aggravated criminal enterprise, the vanity of warlords, cultural genocide or the follies of national leadership on one side or another; Ukraine, Lebanon, Iran, Libya, Syria, The Sahel, The Horn of Africa, Sudan, Nigeria, Congo, Kashmir, Afghanistan, Pakistan, India, Myanmar, China, Tibet, Philippines, Indonesia, Hatti, Mexico, South Sudan, Russia, Crimea, Yemen to name but a few representing the myriad of conflicts and places of anguish throughout this world.

Let us never turn our backs, let us never, never give up.

Wishing you well
Roger

 

A website for the Mothers of Israel and Palestine group
https://mothers-call.org/

 

Just A Suggestion for Adaptation

Foreword: In the days of politicised, and commercialised religions if a reader/ listener had a very nominal belief in one, or none at all then any outright demonstration of belief could be off-putting, troubling or even give rise to hostility. In the jagged history of Humanity like many a facet which has been subject to misappropriation this is nothing new. We are a flawed species and it’s no use blaming anything other than ourselves, whatever topic and whatever side of the argument. We have had some wonderous notions or insights, on paper; the trouble being the paper doesn’t get a say.
Therefore I only offer the following as a suggestion to be adapted as the reader sees fit.

Topic- Holy Saturday. Brief Outline
Whereas Good Friday and Easter Sunday / Monday are familiar concepts, since commercialisation never rest, Holy Saturday gets missed a lot. Basically for some Christian Branches, after Jesus dies on The Cross (Good Friday) the belief is that having risen He descends in Hell (Known sometimes as the Harrowing of Hell) to basically tell Satan, he can’t hold souls he’s not entitled to, and they get freed (theologically, it’s not that simple- but you get the drift). This is done prior to His return to our world. Holy Saturday is therefore a day of sombre reflection but looking forward with Hope and Faith.
At this stage I conclude the explanation because this post is not one to discuss the theological, ethical or philosophical implications and cases for and against. This post is all about the previous sentence.    

  

Sombre Reflections and Hopes and Faiths
I would suggest the aforementioned Christian approach to this particular outlook can be adapted to a secular viewpoint during times of stress, fear, gloom and all times thick in tragedy. Firstly this is not some attempt to look for happy side or sunshine and lollipops; that would be downright insulting to many. This is where a tough call comes in as a response to despair or giving up. This is the place where we look into what has taken place, what is taking place and based upon our own personal outlooks, knowledge and wishes we seek out the belief that somewhere, somehow, somewhen the anguish, the suffering, the pain, the fear will be overcome, or at best circumvented.  
Very rarely will this result in some overwhelming sense of joy or relief from all the grim feelings. but the intention will be to give personal Hope. That all is not lost, that there will be at some relief to the wretchedness being witnessed or experienced. This of course will be down to your own efforts, and may take a great deal of thought, not just fitted into one day.
You may find some beliefs challenged and having to work against the feelings you are experiencing which, based on the evidence to hand appear to be the only rational response. Thus you will be called upon to work through what have might have seen to be solid. The sowing, nurturing and harvesting of True Hope  will always be hard work, requiring constant attention, for despondency and its attendant corrosions never rest. True Hope is not simply won and placed on some personal cabinet to smile at a job well done. The task never ends.
And it will not end in your lifetime. You may never see the results, yet if you can pass on something other than fashionable cynicism, Pop Culture Nihilism or complete Abrogation of Responsibility (the lazy version of Libertarianism) then you will have gifted the next generations something to work with. 
And that is as much as we can all Hope for.         

Conclusion (or Beginning)
It might seem easy for some to detach themselves from the harsher aspects of the the World, particularly if they think there is nothing which concerns them and financially everything thing is OK. It is a dangerously naïve outlook and one day Circumstance will come knocking on their door.
For some what is attractive is just giving up and lapsing into a torpor which they try and sell as some adaption to a philosophy, any philosophy that they can interpretate as ‘not doing anything’ . They too will get The Knock On The Door.
And of course there is running about thrashing and raging trying to blame everything on some sort of hopelessly complex Conspiracy, or another group, any group will do. That is going down a destructive road.
It is best therefore to prepare yourself against all that can and will go wrong with the knowledge that ultimately they will not prevail. Repeat of a previous caution. It will not be easy, nothing worthwhile will be.