‘Spotlit Under Street Lamps’ Poetry of the UK West Midlands by Sheila Jacob

Foreword: I have been married to the author for fifty years now. Nevertheless that is no reason why I cannot review this book

Sheila has been writing poetry for most of her life; the past fifteen years have been her most prolific, her work being published in a number of independent publications and success in competitions. This year her ambition was realised and a collection of one theme in her writing  Spotlit Under Street Lamps was published in the UK in June.

The thirty poems are reflections and accounts of family life, set against the backdrop of the UK city of Birmingham. Whereas similar bodies of work will centre on personal recollections of experiences and observations, through steady research Sheila drew on records of various family members. Thus the poems cover an era from the latter quarter of the 19th Century up to her own earlier years of the 1950s and 60s, seen through the experiences of individuals living at the hard practical edge of life.

To initially illustrate this, the first ten poems are set in Victorian and Edwardian eras and the during turbulent decade which involved World War 1, the impact of that war, and the suffragette movement through the experiences of folk whose major concerns were very much the day to day ones   

Starting with poignancy displayed in ‘Her mark’ s opening lines:
‘is a single X instead of Catherine,
inked next to Benjamin
on the register of Kingsbury Parish
March19th 1871′ 

With an eye for the small details of the domestic servant’s life in  ‘Up at the big house – January 24th 1901′
‘Cramped four to a bed, kitchen and laundry maids rub each
other’s sore feet’

And maybe not the outlook your were expecting in the poem involving the suffrage movement ‘The Preoccupations of Women’ 

Woven carefully into the narratives of the poems ‘Munitionette Birmingham 1916′,War Wounds and Peacetime Photographs’,  ‘My Grandad Ernie’s Rosary Beads’ and ‘My Grandad Ernie finds a use for his campaign medals’ are the themes of work, war and aftermath. Not in the stark, dramatic traditions, these are delivered in the settings of the routine of the Homefront, the quiet interludes between conflicts and in the long path of decades on, giving the reader the opportunity to consider those events from a quieter and thoughtful place.  

Poetry is a medium in which the writer needs to make each word count as much as say ten or twenty in a story, and Sheila accomplishes this in the journey through the lives of family members. Events of tenderness Sheila’s parents’ first meetings at a place of work ‘They Met At Fisher and Ludlow- 1948’   along with the work-a-day episodes ‘Granny Bridget Rolls Up Her Sleeves’ . Each one is given the same attention to detail and observation. Those whose subject matter are based on her own memories and experiencing ‘Railway bridges and back-to-backs – 1959′  or ‘When I swap stories with my long-lost cousin Pat’  convey both the imagery of witness and poignancy, the both reveal the loss of a father in his mid-forties.

‘Brummies’ accent and style of talking often comes as very conversational, even when the topics are redolent with emotion which is a strength of these poems and this can appear in their writing too. But consider the subject and words threaded together in the phrases and you have the scene coming right at you; 

‘Your mum’s dabbing her eyes.
Mum who never weeps
turns a working holiday
into the year’s highlight.
You’re nineteen tomorrow
and suddenly, bab, you’re afraid’

(Closing verse of  ‘Somerset summers’ set in September 1939)

Anthems to those folk never mentioned in the histories but without them there would be less colourful and richer nations. Quietly powerful, sunrises and moonrises shining through The Past’s Mists.  

Footnote: The books are being sold independently from our home £9.50 / $12.50 / 11.30 euros. (Includes Postage & Packaging, anywhere globally). Enquiries for further information e-mail nnqp1863@yahoo.co.uk   

Or pay by PayPal: address- she1jac@yahoo.com

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AI Narration for an Audio Book- Through The Prism of ‘The Friendship of Mortals’ by Audrey Driscoll

A Friendhsip of Mortals

Foreword: The cover shown above is not the cover shown for the audio book, suffice it to say I personally can’t convince that to ‘travel’. Never mind.

To begin with for those who are new to Audrey’s Herbert West series. Basically Audrey took a H P Lovecraft short story, Herbert West: Re-Animator

Reanimator_poster

And expanded this into a series of four full-length novels, the details of which you will find on Audrey’s blog on Word Press.

https://audreydriscoll.com/

Audrey, ever willing to push boundaries and explore avenues recently placed Volume I ‘The Friendship of Mortals’ on a audio version using Google Playbooks AI. Her adventures with this process are recorded on the following link.

https://wordpress.com/read/feeds/81908/posts/5270164345 

As an owner of a Kindle e-book version this was an opportunity not to be missed. Google Playbooks being a fairly easy app to get hold of and download onto laptop / phone.

Being an avid audio books listener and admiring of the skills and art of the professional narrator to infuse life into a book, I was interested to hear how an AI would cope. Word’s ‘Read Aloud’ part of its ‘Review’ section had proved itself to be reasonably lively, listening to the Google Playbook version was going to be interesting.

The Initial Impression of Voice Production.
The voice is male, and accent being what, as a Brit I would call ‘Average American’; my own, subjective impression being of an age range 30 – 40. A clear annunciation, a steady pace and not in a monotone. Easy to listen to.  He has name ‘Matt’ – nice touch.

Success of Dramatic Interpretation
With the growth of the Audio Book market in recent decades, the standard of narration has had to keep pace. Some narrators have their own followings. There are also narration Nazis who carp -but that’s a different topic. Suffice it to say I was interested to see how ‘Matt’ would shape up.
I’m pleased to say ‘he’ did very well. The narrative is by West’s friend – Charles Milburn which saved the issue of ‘accents’ and voice interpretation. That said there was a definite intonation in the voice and the pauses were natural.  AI ‘Matt’ manages to convey the sense of different characters’ speaking, and even a sense of Milburn’s internal monologue. It has be said ‘Matt’ has been helped by skill, style and art of Audrey’s writing which makes the written version an easy read.

Conclusion
I feel Google Book’s AI is working, and will be a useful addition for indy authors with the patience and attention to details to work with it. If you have the written version of this book, this is a worthy addition and allows you to enjoy the book, while about other tasks. If you have not yet entered Audrey’s Herbert West – ‘verse’ then this is an ideal way to explore the starting place. And then buy the book. Recommended. 

Only about five or six audio books to listen to and then I must also download ‘She Who Comes Forth’ which introduces ‘France Leighton’, a young woman of the 1960s who is part of the Herbert West heritage.

AI can cope.

Essential Reading For Those Starting Out or Maybe A Bit Lost and Discouraged

K. M . Allan has produced an invaluable post brimming with sage advice on the craft and art of just not having your work noticed but in dealing with the ramification. 
Well worth your time. 

Book Launch The Chronicles of the Twelve Realms by Rachael Ritchley

Rachael has put a great deal of worthwhile effort into this Fantasy trilogy books. Whereas they are as Rachael says appropriate for Young Teens, her skilful and artistic writings makes them a good read for anyone who likes fantasy and adventure without any grimdark.  Recommended.

She’s Launched! — Audrey Driscoll’s Blog

My latest novel, She Who Returns, is now available for purchase on Amazon, in both ebook and print form. AMAZON:  US  UK  CA  AU In case you missed the pre-order discount, it will be available for one more week. That applies also to She Who Comes Forth, the first novel of the pair.

She’s Launched! — Audrey Driscoll’s Blog