Escape Velocity Has Been Achieved and Craft Holding (Another Chapter in a Very Irregular Series About One Person’s Approach to Writing)

A while back I took the step of announcing the start of a new writing project

On Outlining A New Writing Venture (A post with no reason other than I was having fun with it)

The exercise was conducted to make sure that having ‘gone public’ I had better well carry on with this venture, there having been numerous other attempts which had faded away. The announcement was a boost to ensure my momentum kept moving to escape velocity. This is problem A Panster will often encounter. The process of not working from a true outline, or several pages of notes, but instead relying on ‘something’ popping into the imagination, or being inspired by the last few hundred words while only having maybe the vaguest of ideas as to where ‘this’ is going. Such an outlook can lead to falling prey to Life’s Daily Distraction or an attack of the Existentialist ‘What Is The Point Of It All’, or worse ‘Oh Heck…I’ve done all this before with different names and locations‘   (More about that problem a little later on)

My dependable notion of ‘Never Waste A Good World Build’ once more came to my aid. The Narrative would be set in the world of my previous trilogy. The fact that I could not decide whether in the Past, Present or Future of the previous trilogy’s setting was at the onset of little consequence at least there was a backdrop. As the narrative progress ‘The Future’ seemed the most suitable, this was made easier by the fact that in this ‘world’ of mine, Time was a flexible quality anyway, and there was the good old dependable ‘Ethereal’ an elemental force which is all things to all folk but woe to those who took it for granted or tried to control or expunge it. In this environment Continuity was not really a problem; and as a bonus enabled me to possibly sneak in the spice of a Hidden or Forbidden History factor. I kept the same Empire, Religion and some of the more powerful agencies as this would be useful for later on as to who was keeping what History from who and naturally for some stalwart characters to uncover ‘Stuff’.   

Maybe it’s because of having strong stalwart women in my life; my wife of 51 years, two daughters, a granddaughter and daughter-in-law that I have always tended to place women at the forefront of my stories (also because it will annoy the heck out of those lesser males who object to strong women). Thus, as I started off, there were another three women being drawn into very unexpected situations, and meeting and bonding, even the rather same types as before; trouble? Not really; at the onset this suggested a link between the previous three books. Descendants? That might be stretching things a bit and requiring a lot of explanations out of character with the previous three central figures. No, what was required here was an element explored in the previous works- The Ethereal as a reactive force drawing certain types of folks together; this gave some of the more dogged lesser characters cause to explore into what was taking place and delve into that ‘Forbidden History’ and of course all reach different conclusions. That could be interesting, all manner of possibilities.

Now what was missing? Oh yes….

As usual I had forgotten a central plot. Yes, my BIG failing, getting so much wound up with the characters that their day to day events become the whole story, and whereas it is fun to write you can’t really expect folk to read an entire book’s worth, not in a fantasy background anyway.

Thus far though plenty of material to weave in….

1.One heir to a throne has to get married soon, two rival houses intending their daughters to be his bride. He is very agitated with the politics and takes a ‘gap’ to clear his head he goes out with a military border patrol; lots more politics there. Suddenly ambushed! Escapes! How will this work out? Will he survive and how will his character develop? (By the way there is an Ethereal link between him and the three central women characters- one that none of them really know about, him least of all. What kind of relationships?) 
2.Somewhere else in the empire a very determined fundamentalist branch of the state religion are working up to a crusade. One fellow in particular. Note, don’t make him a pantomime villain. Give his side of things. Also they HATE the Ethereal. And let us not forget that no group is free from the whimsy of factionalism.
3. Where most of the characters live. Lots of local politics between two princedoms and one independent Dukedom, the latter favoured by the Empire. Also folk lurking in the wings there either barely seen or only thus far mentioned in name.
4. Also there’s The Empire, well a writer can certainly work with An Empire’s shenanigans. 
5. AND – Of course The Ethereal and those forbidden / unknown histories.
6. AND EVEN MORESO – All the ‘stuff’ I mentioned above with the central characters.
7. Not to mention several lesser characters with promise to develop.  And a few loose threads that need tightening.
Also
8, 9 & 10 – As write I don’t know what they are, but they are bound to be lurking around somewhere.

Plenty to work with. In fact so much I detect another trilogy. Too much colour and potential to spoil with a planned layout. In real life Wars and Politics never go to plan. One theme I am using again, the three central characters being swept up in events. Like real Life.  

Also this is a first draft and a writer will know that’s a terrible version. There is plenty to be re-written, replaced, downright ditched. Onward- ever onward. To where I know not.

Gosh, this is fun….
Advice for Writers starting off and New Writers struggling……Keep all those scraps you have written or have buzzing around in your head, you never know when they will come in handy, get it down on paper or ‘doc’ and worry about the finer points later on. 

Incepto ne Desistam. A Pantser’s Motto?

Ok, I admit the title might be a bit of pretension, and no I am not classical trained. The snippet of Latin which translates as – ‘May I Not Shrink From My Purpose’ is simply a case of In Google I Trust. (And used in the hope that no Latin scholars will chance upon this and have grounds for pointing out my error in usage)  That said a Pantser should never shrink from appropriating stuff out of the Public Domain, short of blatant plagiarism that is, of course.

The reasons for aforementioned appropriation, its justification and then strident qualifier will come as no surprises to any Veteran and also Proud Panster. We who work with the barest of threads or the smidge-est of ideas for a plot, if we start with one at all, and thence aware of the perils of the journey which lies ahead proceed, boldly, carelessly, doggedly, anarchically, irreverently and other associated adverbalies all the while intent on reaching a conclusion.

Well we will have an idea of what we are going to write about. Some sort of reason or imagery. Maybe even the ending, or what we might think will be the ending, This faint image will fade like mists in sunny Spring Morn’s under a growing glare of circumstances.

At some stage you hope Characters will start tell you the way you are going about the business is simply not going to work and you should listen to them. However herein does lie one of the issues a Pantser might well have to confront on a regular or in extreme cases a daily basis, being The Characters insisting they known best. ‘Here’s what is going to happen, now you just be a good little wordsmith and write a few hundred words on the scene or plot twist. No, we’re not going to tell you how, that’s your job,’ At this stage you zone out to your family, friends and maybe some of your allotted time at the job you would rather not be doing while you wander the foggy lands of your imagination and writing skills trying to find a way through. 

Whereas I personally grimly indulge in taking up the challenge, it is understood this can be unnerving for someone relatively new to the process. Having a character mentally nudge you just before you drift off in nightly slumbers, or wake you up at some variable time, then leave you wondering ‘What?’ and resisting the urge to slither out of bed to sit vacantly at a laptop or blank paper is not really conducive to the creative process. I wonder if this is the true reason behind the sudden demise of a few major characters part way through some novels.

With all of this in mind here is something of an account which as is my custom is an intention either to be a warning or an ‘Ah. Not just me then,’ to any readers who are also embarking or struggling with a project.

Back in 2021 my previous trilogy came to a conclusion, and of course my creative side was wondering where to go next. Firstly there was a thought ‘Well you could do a follow up….Like twenty years on?’. I pitched an opening draft (or three) to the central characters of the previous work. They weren’t very enthusiastic. ‘It’s not just that we are happy with retirement Rog’. To be brutal we can tell your heart and imaginative whizz-bang is not in this’ Trelli being the most level-headed of the three as always is very forth-right while usually being polite.

Thus I examined various formats in the Fantasy  / Sci-Fi genres and relevant possible plot lines ranging from the irreverently comic to the lightly serious. The Fantasy outlines were all rooted in the world of the Trilogy (Never waste a good World Build ), Past, Present of Future but I could not get Characters who were interested in the plot lines. Some were dissatisfied that I was not going with a true Rom-Com while others were more intent on turning entire chapters into Shakespearean soliloquies or 19th Century Russian novel reflection on Life. Also the more action inclined folk were complaining about hanging around having a couple of paragraphs of sword waving while waiting for the possible true battles somewhere ‘up the road’. And none of the aforementioned sides were happy with the time given over to those who indulged in lecturing on geo-political realism. 

There was an interlude when basing the tales in a Sci-Fi setting showed promise. I am fascinated in the Quantum Mechanics concept of the 11 dimensions in String Theory, and wondered about with this as the basis for practical interstellar travel in days thus getting around that faster than light ‘thing’ . You travelled through the 11 dimensions. Great idea? Well in my excitement I missed the obvious 12th Dimension – A Creditable Plot, all I had were folk aimlessly mooching about a empire wide set up doing quirky things. Anyway the true Quantum Mechanics theories were nothing like what I had in mind. The format might have been Pantsing but not really rewarding Pantsing. More like a TV ‘Soap into ‘that’ season when the audience knows the writers have run out of quality ideas. 

And yet still, there was the persistence to write another work or series of works. True to Panster’s code, having no plot and no characters would be poor excuses for not writing. What was required was some need to kick-start. This arose in a naturally sideways manner from the need to use my Netflix subscription and thus by chance watching two series of animated story lines based on computer games. The fine level character development and attention to plots held me to repeat viewings. Happily nothing has been appropriated from these but the experiences did stir me into thinking up all sorts of combinations of people, places and events, based in my precious world-build. Encouraged somewhat by something which might ‘develop’ I then indulged in one of my naughtier ploys as used in Writing Prompt challenges. This was to listen to audio book versions of respected and revered works of Fantasy Fiction and intersperse the narrative with my own irreverent observations or additions to put me into my writing mood, Yes, I know it’s not dignified or mature but Pantsers reserve the right to utilise the ‘Works for Me’ approach.   

Thus the project commenced with a few characters who had been hanging around for a while but never cared much for the scripts given to them. This time satisfied with the initial scenarios and basic directions they set to work content to veer off script as they saw fit. The modest hub-bub attracted other folk who had previously told me ‘They’d let me know’ and gradually one of those communities of characters essential to the tradition of Heroic Fantasy began to accumulate. At this stage there was the general debate about which way the plot and sub-plots might develop, fortunately there was an agreement that there would have to be one central theme with room for differing narratives to work through. Everyone was of the belief that if it was going to be Heroic there would have to be some sort of conflict. Adoption of the nascent natural element The Ethereal was enthusiastically approved of as its evasive nature allowed for all sorts of liberties to be taken with Time, Place and Rationale, strict adherence to Continuity being a bit of a trial. 

As the work reached the 10,000th word passage I felt sufficiently confident enough to release a public notification this launch might have potential.

On Outlining A New Writing Venture (A post with no reason other than I was having fun with it) 

This bold step taken there was no option but to continue.

Now I have passed the 20,000 word stage. Characters are settling into their roles, back stories are starting to form and I have the outline of a plot, of course this will not survive contact with the main characters and the support characters more than capable of effecting a change. Whether the Whole evolve into more than one volume is something which is quite beyond current forecasting. All that truly matters is ‘It’s On Its Way’

What more could a Pantser ask for?

It Will Not Go Away: August #BlogBattle- Pareidolia

Horsehead Nebula

In the early decades of the 22nd century, spurred by some spectacularly disastrous weather events during the mid 21st century the general fright broke of the final barrier that Climate Regeneration was a world-wide necessity, and most attention was thus directed. In consequence sciences such as those in the Cosmological area were gently eased in quiet corners, left to a few to keep things ‘ticking over’ as it were. Space exploration being mostly restricted to the Solar System, and then even to the locality of Earth, Moon, Mars region. Those who scan the far stars were few in number, an indulged but generally overlooked group.

Cardon was one. The natural fascination with starry nights had been the start and with a quiet persistence he had followed that into study. Whenever asked by friends and relatives, he being an affable soft spoken fellow would say something conversationally along the lines of  ‘Someday folk will look starwards again, and glad the information was kept fresh,’, and the listeners would smile, then swiftly turn to other topics. Cardon would smile at them, be affable, while thinking on the next quiet step in his own journey for knowledge.

There were very few astronomical observatories left, many from any earlier age converted to issues relating to the weather and of the small number still looking outwards, the majority dealt with the respectable issues of assisting in colonisation research or stellar Impact Events. There were, to his knowledge but ten in the world whose attention was on the further cosmos, funded by billionaires who shared the interest. Folk who had enough wealth to inure themselves from public opinion and official unhappiness and commentary on ‘wasted’ resources.

He sat musing over the latest tranche of computer images transmitted from the Reflecting Telescope. It was quite the challenge to decide on where to study, in this he and his colleagues were glad of the archive material from the previous century, with which you could try and fill in gaps, or review.  Currently he was revisiting that most fascinating shape The Horsehead Nebulae part of the Orion molecular cloud complex, a dusty birthplace of stars, and thus a signpost for the study of the massive forces at work to bring about such events. He had been working for some time to seek out the more detailed physical evidence. He knew the shortcomings, the comparative time scales between stellar conception to birth and a person’s life span were so vast in difference no one person could hope to witness the evolution of one sample but in detailed study they could see different subjects at different stages. He would comfort himself with the additional idea that there would be ample evidence there to study the nature of molecular cloud complexes. One of many pathways of study which had been discarded and the progress choked off.  

With this in mind he had chosen to look at magnified images the better to seek out detail in the physical. He had had to discard, though, for it seemed the magnification process had led to an excess of blurring, particularly from the centre to the right of what could be called the neck of the ‘horse’s head’. On reflection this seemed to illustrate just how much skill and even artistry had been forgotten over the past seventy years. Accepting that Finding Ways Which Don’t Work is all part of the process Cardon settled on examining smaller sized conventional images, using computer programmes to analyse what would be the components.

He chose for the first place, the lighter shades to the right of the nebulae on the basis that the variety might give a better ground for comparison and thus insight.

Maybe the train of thought started with musing on the very term ‘Horsehead Nebulae’. There could be no argument the feature did resemble a horse’s head, neck and if you looked to the greyish area to the top, a mane. Some old terms for certain cosmological features he thought a bit of a stretch, but ‘Horsehead’. So obvious. One example of the classic Pareidolia phenomenon, the mind ever inventive in translating.   And maybe because his  was opened up to looking with that perspective, when studying the right side feature, he gradually discerned an image all of its own. There a complex of colouration standing out from the predominant dark. Slender, a form which leant itself to the outline of the upper part of a body. Struck with a type of clarity, his attention and then perception grew. Half way up the neck, an outline which could be discerned as a face made all the more believable by the shaded images of wide shapes which could be two eyes, below these a mouth; three distorted into the suggestion of alarm or anguish.

He paused, struck by the plausibility of the translation. Whereas pareidolia had been an ancient circumstance, you had to be very careful in these days. Governments and societies were united in the suspicion of anyone trying to divert attention from the great scheme of repairing the environment, things could go very hard on anyone engaged in anything other than the practical. To even in a light vein casually mentioning any abnormal interpretation of anything was considered at best ‘bad taste’. And Pity help anyone found even just dabbling in the now forbidden Astrology. He would cast the idea aside and turn his attention back to the scientific and the dark constituents of the cloud. Just one more glance, only out of curiosity.

The face was clearer. He could now see either some sort of hair style or headgear, even forelimbs, out pressing against an undefinable barrier. Quite clearly he could make out the image of a trapped individual, held in the darkness. His mind raced through the implications, the rationalisation of what this image would mean. A being so vast you would measure their span in nearly a light year trapped in a prison of some three and one-half light years. The concept of the forces at work, the unfathomable potential tale of how this event had come to pass. All had come rushing in on him as if he had opened a door in his mind to a raging storm of possibilities, the equivalent of one of those tornados which now plagued vast areas with their rapid and violent arrival.

Hands in his face he sat down heavily on the floor propped against a wall, telling himself this could not be reality. You simply could not have a being so large imprisoned. And how, by other beings or trapped by some vast celestial version of a swamp? These thoughts were beyond the rational. Yet as fast as he told himself, there was the unarguable  proposition that in a Fourteen Billion year old, Ninety-Three billion light year wide Universe, something that covered but three and one-half light years was a speck. What was one light year’s size set against Ninety-Three Billion, ever expanding, and only the observable. Another wave of thoughts battered against his reasoning, the distance was one thousand, three hundred and seventy-five light years. Was that torment still going on now? And for how long?

Safe from the image reasoning enveloped him. He told himself this reaction was ridiculous. He worked upon perspectives and circumstances. He had, he said, been working too hard, with a defensive frame of mind, a constant struggle not to raise suspicions that this work did not matter when set against the battle to save the world. Somewhere in jungle of the stresses of work and maintenance of normality a toxic mix of imagination and fevered intention to believe his work had a true important purpose he had stepped over to a place where the frenetic ran loose. What he had seen was not so. Simply an incidence of Pareidolia, and the imagination.

In an attempt at composure he tided up his work and made to put it all neatly away for the morrow, when in the freshness of day, and the small but convivial company of the trio of colleagues he would seek out another approach. Importantly put away the images of the Horsehead Nebulae, file them as archival material, seek out some stellar image upon which you could not impose an artificial imagery. This done, he repaired to another room, fixed himself a herbal brew and listened to selection of soft and calming music, waiting for sleep to creep upon him. Any attempt to deliberately seek slumber he had to accept would be useless, for the memory of the image even with his efforts to return to easier circumstances, was still there, a constant unsettling replay, feeding the urge to consider the probabilities of his being a witness to vast and fearsome events.

Removed from the atmosphere of work, endeavouring to marshal music and a soothing brew into a combination to cultivate calm he opted not to deny the experience by challenging it with common sense. Here he could tell himself that surely he was not the first person in the history of Humanity’s observations of the stellar landscapes to have seen such a sight. There had been the whole discipline of Astrology, a few thousand years old and only recently discouraged, the basis of which was enriched by seeing pattens of stars, from there had started out the evolution of scientific study. Therefore other folk must have seen the same or similar image in the Horsehead. Yet no recorded commentary.  

If only there he could have broken the yoke of Restless Enquiry, settled on a brief humorous sniff of dismissal, and a resolve to take a serious reflection on his approach to the study, even a dalliance with changing career and putting his education and experience to other tracks. Yet the suddeness of the event would not be stilled. Suppose others had actually seen the same? Suppose they had managed to make that step of dismissal and continue on their way. Suppose though they had mentioned it to others? And suppose ridicule had set in, their reputations, their work ruined. Suppose to suit the purposes of rivals the casual comment had to used to suggest insanity and the proponent’s official removal? Suppose, just suppose, the information had a history of being suppressed on the ground that the claimants had made too good a case, and such words should be consigned to somewhere to be lost and then forgotten, the fate of the claimants wrapped in the fog of of distraction of other events? The latter was a chilling but equally believable scenario; for when the population became aware of this possibility, who could predict what types of disruptions could arise in that most fragile of Human concepts, Society? Aware his hand of trembling and the surface of the brew quivering under the attentions of his own personal storm, he with great effort made to steer into the more stern and essential disciplined world of the Scientific. There he chided himself for not seeking this refuge in the first place. For was it not obvious to the trained and focused mind that this was mere Human distortion of a simple manifestation of gas and dust into a recognisable pattern, all down to wayward imagination? Imagination and the urge for part of the mind to seek to impose a façade of recognisable reality. Nothing more. Nothing more.

He dozed. In the morning he joshed with his colleagues about being side-tracked in looking at far too many images because there were so many to look at. It was safe ground, they had all fallen to that temptation. Nothing more came of it. The work was not the same though, and after a respectable passage of time, he took up the offer of working on the Lunar Transportation hub timetable calculation. There was comfort in such Civic Work and it was valued. Respectable.  

Twenty million light years from the Horsehead Nebulae, essential observations continued on the site and its imagery. The reasoning remote from Human comprehension. 

Neither this, nor Humanity’s activity to save itself had any influence on the dynamics of The Universe.