An Explanation and Something of a Justification

I cannot quite place which of the Laurel & Hardy films Olly looks at Stan in that wonderful exasperated expression and asks ‘What did you do that for?’ . It seems to fit the theme of the post though.

Preamble 
I have long forgotten what my ‘WP Name’ was when first starting out on WP some fourteen years ago. All went well until between them WP & Kismet turned my replies to other posts into either unknown or spam. Neither would not admit to a flaw or offer an apology and would refer me to the other. That PAID FOR account was closed down and I set up a new  FREE account (Are you reading this WP?).
Anyway, simmering from the previous treatment I chose the name ‘determineddespiteWP’ as my  ‘name’ in thinking a point was being made, if only to myself.
And there it was for years and years and years. Quite forgotten, to the extent when folk replied to me by the name ‘determined’ for a few moments there would be no recognition until the ‘Oh Yeah’ kicked in.

The Build Up
The original reason for joining WP was to raise my writing profile and interact with other Indy writers. However (there is always an ‘However’), once involved with the ‘back and forth’ and dipping into random posts which caught the attention of my political side, I became involved in that track…….. Bound to happen.
And gradually, then at an increasing pace the folk being followed and my own posts took on a majority political slant; there was even a second site given over to politics but that withered a bit. The writer in me lamented…loudly at times…but despite a few public announcements there would be no more politics it did not take much for me to slip back to political views as a theme.
Now being a reader of histories, historical references and allegories tended to abound in my writing….. Here comes another ‘However’…….. Most of the my favoured subject matter were Military Histories along with the associated political causes and effects; and when wars are involved there are certainly no happy beginnings or middles and very rarely any truly satisfactory much less happy endings. This leaves an inveterate reader of these histories with a certain outlook. Some might call it ‘Realistic’, some might compliment you with ‘Incisive’ , others might simply suggest ‘Gloomy’ of ‘Judgemental’ – I would not argue with the latter.
Thus my posts or responses were along the lines of ‘It’s Happening Again. And Won’t Turn Out Well,’   or very censorious observations on the flaws in Human Nature. 
This outlook resulted in one recent throwaway line ‘Call me Cassandra’ used in a response to another’s post and they took up the challenge. I could not leave well alone.

Rationale 
Whereas the name has its origins in the Greek Mythologies around events in Troy, I cannot, truly identify with this most unhappy young trojan prophetess or her life. That would be, when examining the detail, downright ridiculous and weird. My allusion is with the common modern assumption that the name is all to do with very ominous predictions which many might feel extreme. BUT also and more to the point the popular British newspaper journalist William Connor, who headed his column with this name.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/William_Connor   

In this there is a certain amount, albeit presumptuous dignity.  

Conclusion
My blog will still remain though  
Writing Despite Computers and Programmes
For this seems to be a common missions statement for most Bloggers hereabouts.

File this under ‘Just Saying. That’s All’ 

Best wishes to you all.
Roger

The War Posts Part IV- An Explanation and Remorse.

I had completed a post to conclude a series when suddenly the whole lot was wiped by WP.
I should have been more careful and kept at least two layers of back-ups.
Needless to say my response was not fit for an all-Age audience.

There will therefore be a delay before the last of this series is up on WP, maybe a few days while I distil out all the fury at what took place. Subjects like this need a focused mind.

The War Posts – Part I .An Introduction to War

The War Posts Part II – The Logic of War

The War Posts Part III – When Industry Replaced Cavalry and its Arm Grew Long

 

IT COULDN’T HAPPEN HERE (Patriots’ Stories)

Don’t worry folks. This is only A STORY . THAT’S ALL- A STORY.

The Turn Around of the Mid 21st Century; the movement back to moderation. This you are about to read is a fanciful, far fetched myth as to how that took place. Naturally too fantastic to be credible. What obviously did take place was simply the usual shifting of political tides, albeit it with a few pieces of the normal dramas which got blown out of all proportions. Mere entertainment this, and no more. It never happened.

Marcia Handsbrooke checked her hair in the hall mirror, set her President’s Support Cap carefully in place, checked her hair again, then with a spring in her step and a sunny determination stepped out in bright early summer’s morn. Her day all laid out before her. First to the weekly morning meeting to brief the other ‘Girls’ of The Mothers Vigilant on the latest warnings of Woke activity, nationally, regionally and in the town itself, making sure everyone was up to speed, on the same page, and prepped, there would also be the Church Committee meeting at midday and the PTA in the afternoon, though they tended to defer to the Mothers’ Vigilant these days, a very hard slog but worth it. Then in the evening after dinner it would be onto the Social Media. Yes the work was never done, but it was all worth it. And Mike bless him was so supportive, he never argued. There was much to be done these days. The news was often reporting disturbances in the big cities, the would be another piece about towns going through a sort of liberal woke secession. And there were always the problems in Statonville itself. The small independent church on West Tree. Those two unofficial libraries. At least two ‘underground newspapers’. Nasty scenes in public. You had to be vigilant indeed.

On stepping into her driveway she noticed idling up the street an unfamiliar blue car. That ‘H’ caught in the sunlight. No one in the street had a Honda. Inside a white couple, dressed well and appearing to be in conversation. They drew alongside, the driver rolled down his window, he looked extremely refined and respectable.
‘Excuse us m’am. Our GPS has gotten us confused, we’re looking for,’
At this point the woman, younger than him got out of the car and began to stretch and flex her leg.
‘Sorry leg’s cricked after the journey,’
‘It’s those half marathons,’ he replied in a mild, scolding, patriarchal way ‘Anyway as I was saying m’am, whereas we’ve found your lovely town of Statonville. We can’t find this ‘Brakeleaf Road?’
‘Brakeleaf Road?’ quizzed Marcia ‘I’ve lived here all of my life. Never heard of that. Can I see that piece of paper you have there? Check the zip code for you. Marcia Handsbrooke by the way,’
‘Jon Wyndale,’ he replied, smile and a brief civil handshake ‘And the Olympiad there is Feylena Raff,’ who smiled and waved as she passed Marcia’s car pacing off her crick.
Marcia looked at the document laughed.
‘Oh no wonder. You’re looking for Drakelane Road. That’s down near the town centre. I’m on my way in that direction. You can follow me,’
‘Oh computers. How do they mangled an address? That’s nice of you Marcia,’ said Jon he glanced at his watch ‘We’re running late as it is. Hey! C’mon Amy Cragg. Marcia is going to be our guide,’
Feylena still hobbling back from the driveway opening ‘Ha-ha’d and moved to their car. Marcia went to hers and gasped.
‘Oh shoot. I’ve got a flat. Mike always handles this. And I have a meeting to attend,’
Feylena placed a friendly hand on Marcia’s arm.
‘Oh they are the worst. I had two in one month. Look you’ve been so helpful to us. If you just guide us to town, can we take you to your meeting place,’
Jon chimed in.
‘Sure. I mean I can change a flat, but if you are pressed for time. And we’re happy to help,’
Feeling a bit mean for being cautious Marcia nonetheless glance in the car. The shoulder bag was open, she could see the black and gold of a bible. And the latest by Bart Murth her favourite conservative author, Feylena was slipping in the back and rummaging through it.
‘Such a mess,’ she muttered.
Marcia sat next to Jon and he followed her directions. She phoned up Mike gave him a brief account, he said he would get it sorted. He was a bit brief and edgy today, always an indication he was closing on an order. Mind you these days.
Jon’s drive was a bit speedy for Marcia’s taste, but he was obviously a good driver, reflexes very sharp, and composed too, no running commentary about flaws of other drivers, in fact hardly any talk, it was Feylena who did the chatting about how nice the town looked, finally he spoke.
‘Quiet little town,’ he said to Marcia. She was glad it gave that impression. Although…
‘It seems to be today,’ she replied almost to herself. Two places hadn’t opened. Jeff’s gun store, maybe he wasn’t well again. The local party office being shuttered was a surprise. Bret, Jane and Trevor between them normally kept it going through sun, rain or snow, strange not being able to see the smiling confident presidential face beaming out. It was a pity about the shutters, though even here in Statonville there were stone throwers.
‘And the next right. Thank you,’ she said.
Jon took the turning at what she felt was a pace.
‘There’s the meeting hall,’ Marcia said pointing to a building on the right ‘Just in front of the police station,’ which she noticed seemed to have more than the usual patrol cars parked outside, and a few unfamiliar vehicles. Anyway she relaxed there was no one waiting at the hall, waiting for her to unlock the door, Geraldine was after her chairship and would use any slip to complain in that passive way. Jon drove straight to the station though.

The pace of the morning moved faster and things unravelled. As soon as Jon’s car stopped, close to the entrance Feylena, now quite agile, was out of the back seat opening Marcia’s door, unfastening her seat belt and setting a firm hand of Marcia’s arm.
‘Quick Marcia,’ she said in a low voice ‘Get inside. Now,’
Taken a back, confused and a little scared Marcia blankly responded to the now very authoritative military affirmative tone. She did manage a ‘What is going on?’ as Feylena’s now firm grip steered through her the station door, Jon close behind, apparently with his back to her.
Marcia didn’t have a lot of time to take things in as she was hurried through the main office Feylena and Jon now quiet silent, that grip tighter. On her frequent social and civic visits, she’d got to know the officers. A few regular desk folk were not there. Others seemed very muted, heads down. There were some unfamiliar figures. Three in a military style outfits, one of them at a desk and a computer, the two others, still and observant. She had this sudden feeling of being under threat and this pair were protecting her.
As they went through another set of doors she found her voice and senses, mostly now fear driven.
‘Please tell me what is going on?’
From behind her Jon spoke, soft, calming.
‘It’s for your own safety Marcia,’
Oh my, she thought, she had been right.
Her mind now frenetic with ideas of terrorists. Here in Statonville. Was she targeted? You heard on the news about random shootings of folk, prominent in their localities. Mike? The boys? What about them?
She realised, the normally friendly officers and staff, all looking straight ahead, carrying papers, or tapping on phone, tablets. Seeming too absorbed to speak to her.
And into Chief Phelbarg’s office. Only he was not there. An older man, gaunt faced with an air similar to old Principal Dyrsmere at High School, he had been a firm but fair man you never really wanted to be summoned to though.
‘This is Mrs Marcia Handsbrooke sir,’ Jon said in a respectful tone.
‘Thank you agents,’ the man spoke in a deep southern accent, gestured to the chair ‘Please sit down Mrs Handsbooke,’ Marcia now sweating and shaking noticed how he had one of those courtly southern ways she thought only existed in films ‘Agent Raff. Water for Mrs Handsbooke please. You must be quite shaken Mrs Handsbooke. You may take a few minutes, then we will talk,’
‘You should drink,’ Feylena said solicitously handing Marcia a cup of water, and she did as suggested, her mouth was very dry, she could hardly speak, her thoughts all jumbled.
‘Where is Chief Phelbarg?’ she asked, the only question she could frame. The man smiled, gently.
‘He’s busy with other matters Mrs Handsbrooke,’
‘I would like to speak with my lawyer,’ with the sips of water she found clarity.
‘Mr Garmith of Halsdech and Garmith?’ the man asked.
‘Yes,’ she said shaken again, How did he know? The gentle smile again.
‘I believe the partnership is somewhat occupied this morning,’ the smile faded a sadness replaced it ‘There is a suddenness of Uncertainty Mrs Handsbrooke. Even in Statonville,’
With that he referred to a laptop.
‘I am sorry to hurry you Mrs Handsbrooke,’ he turned to a side door calling out ‘Mr Aideren. Mrs Handsbrooke’s file please,’
File?
A young collegiate fellow appeared, smiled briefly handed a manilla folder to the man and sat down, a tablet on his lap. The man lifted out one piece of paper and turned it towards Marcia.
‘Mrs Handsbrooke. Will you please examine this document and confirm all the details are correct?’
Her married name, her maiden name, names of her family. Mike’s business details. Her various associated groups. Bank account details. And more. Twenty five of her forty years all laid out. Marcia found her outrage, she spluttered. She demanded to know what was going on. Who were you? You people. Jon blocked the door. Feylena patted her shoulder. The young man was tapping something on his tablet. The older man could have been Principal Dyrsmere. Serious untroubled features.
‘Please answer my question Mrs Handsbrooke. I assure you it is for the best. The more you co-operate, the more you will understand,’
‘Please Mrs Handsbrooke,’ that was Jon, he sounded so sorry for her, in her shock and more confusion she wilted.
‘Yes. Those details are correct,’ she croaked.
‘Thank you Marcia,’ whispered Feylena. The young man kept tapping. The man continued, he looked stern now. Like the time Principal Dyrsmere reprimanded her and Shirl’ for being caught smoking under the bleachers.

‘Now Mrs Handsbrooke. Your membership of the Mothers Vigilant. Did you of your own free will, six times vocally and five times in written documentation or the computer equivalent use the word ‘Purge’ in relation to fellow citizens of Statonville or concerning elected officials of this state you are resident in?’ he handed her another paper. To her horror she saw itemised in print comments she could recognise, maybe not the exact words ‘In addition. Did you  of your own free will ten times vocally and seven times in written documentation or the computer equivalent make hostile remarks concerning the race, religion or social orientation of citizens of this nation?’ another piece of paper. The process was repeated three other times in swift fashion his voice beginning quicker, more demanding. Marcia could only stammer, make half sentences of protest, excuse or weak demand. Was this all right? She could not recall ever word she had said. From somewhere within a flurry of anger burst out.
‘It’s true then. There is a Deep State,’
And there was Feylena’s hand on her shoulder a slight squeeze, when she looked up to the young woman, this time the expression was firm, the eyes fixed on a tv screen, with the volume turned down. To one side of the news reader was the picture of one of the very vocal colourful rising stars in the current government. According to the feed he had died in a car accident, no other vehicles involved. Other words coming out on the feed. Erratic driving. DUI? Marcia was not a stupid woman. She made the connection. Without one word said.
The questions were repeated. She could not answer though. She was gripped with fresh waves of anger, fear and confusion. Feylena’s hand on her shoulder again, this time it came with a pat, like the expression firm.
‘I think Mrs Handsbrooke needs time sir,’
The man nodded to Jon. Jon also firm faced stood the other side of Marcia, he and Feylena led Marcia out, this time through a back exit. There was a sturdy vehicle, no windows, inside sat three other women seated, belted in silent, she recognised them, a woman guard in uniform and of stone face regarded Marcia cold eyes silencing her.
‘You will sit please. Do not converse with the others. Look straight ahead,’ Marcia shaken did as she was told, there was a gathering numbness of thought, a lack of will. Someone was belting her in. The seats she thought were surprisingly comfy. She had been grateful for that water, so clear, so cool.
The doors closed. There was a slight jolt as the van moved off.

Jon and Feylena exchanged looks.
‘I do prefer a soft deceptive pick up. No distractions. No nosy neighbours,’ he said
‘That was easy,’ she said ‘Comparatively speaking,’
‘Yep. Final part. Another Hot Spot town secure,’
There was a grunt
‘You think? You pair don’t get off so easy this time,’ their superior had joined them ‘Our demonstration is getting a bit more active than we wanted. Some clown’s doing a Washington 2021 and brought a noose. The editor of the local, pro-presidential newspaper has locked himself in the john and is screaming for help,’
‘Good place to hide out. Very convenient ,’ mused Feylena.
‘I’ve said it before’ Jon said with irony ‘None so deadly as liberals, let loose,’
‘I hate crowd control,’ Feylena grumbled ‘I always get kicked in the ankle by some old biddy. I mean a six foot male lummox; you can deal it out and no one minds. But a five foot festy granny?’
Jon patted her on the shoulder. Very sarcastically funny, she thought.
‘I’m sure the director himself will visit you in hospital,’
Naturally she was not mollified.
‘It’s not like we even arranged the demo. That Swatson. He always gets them so fired and agitated. There’s an art to arranging an effective spontaneous demonstration,’
‘I’ll bring you flowers and candy,’ Jon assured.

A month later Marcia was in complete co-operation with the authorities. The diet of dull food, routine low key questioning, isolation and a newsfeeds concerning a high profile financial scandal masked by a government bills and presidential decrees was lose and running all day. She could not be sure what was true. Actually she didn’t care. Because….
The first week. There had been the shown to her video footage of Mike being interviewed by some other men, again polite and low-key. They were thanking him for his assistance.

‘Well I knew she was being politically active, But I thought that was just Marcia. I mean she always did have strong views. Some many folk do these days. I didn’t think there was anything like that to it. I mean violence? Well yes she has her own handgun, but these days who doesn’t it? And she always kept it locked up from the boys,’ at that stage he had started to cry ‘The boys. What do I say to the boys? Boys, your mom has been arrested for being a,’ and he broke down.
The hand on the shoulder.
‘We appreciate this is very hard for you sir. Mr Handbrooke. We thank you for informing us of your concerns in the first place,’ There was sympathy.
‘But I thought you would only be concerned with those she was associating with. Just give her a warning,’ and more sympathy.
That had been the first real body blow. Mike had informed on her.

Then she could not see the boys. She was told by a very empathetic matronly woman it was all for the best. They were safe and the media being kept away. She talked a lot to that woman.
The woman was a good listener. And a very good compiler of reports. As were others.
They decided it was best not for folk such as Marcia to see the programme.
‘Living With a Terrorist’ actually there had been a great deal of debate over the title, some wanted it toned down. Others argued it was necessary to keep the Liberal population on edge and give the moderate conservatives something to think about. Mike was on it, though at his request his face was in shadow and his voice changed.

There were howls of outrage from some conservatives but in the wake of the three school bombings by the right-wing militia the Sons of Liberty, the tide of the nation was turning. There had been some debate about using schools as arranged targets, but though these were spectacular there were only a few cuts and bruises ,and shocks. It was also an ideal cover to efficiently with no quarter terminate several of the militia in shoot-outs, the rest lost the will.

Six months after the Vice President resigned following revelations of their links to the Big Money Scandal (You think we could have come up with a better title? It worked didn’t it?), the lead coming from papers found in the care of that DUI accident. The President stepped down due to severe health issues. The midterms saw a move to the centre. Nothing so useful as a disillusioned or embarrassed conservative. The staged mass burnings of Presidential memorabilia were popular and there were spontaneous ones.

‘Hi there hero. How’s the leg?’
‘Will you tell those so-called jokers back at Office. No more ironic balloons or flowers. Your candy I appreciated. But Look at the place! Like a florists! Anyway the leg hurts like crap. I’m gonna have a scar for life. How is that going to look on the beach? Normally, yeah part of the job.  But taking a bullet for that that a-hole? A rampant misogynist, last holdout of the cabinet,’
‘Yeah, but his blubbering and peeping his pants on TV? Character assassination at its finest there partner,’
Feylena was not assuaged.
‘Another inch and it would have been my ass. My sweet sensational ass,’
Jon patted her other leg.
‘They can do wonders for scars these days. Anyway, what red-blooded American girl doesn’t go for someone with a mysterious scar?’
‘Jenny does not care for me to being the focus of other red-blooded American girls. I get fan mail! I shall have to get another new hair job,’
‘You’ll get a commendation,’
A rude noise followed. Then.
‘Put the word out that when I get out I’ll be looking for the sniper and when I find them, irrespective of rank or clearance I’ll shove their fancy customised rifle so far up. There’s only so much staged reality a girl can take dammit,’

In the government location…
They had been chosen. On the whole they did not care to have been chosen. Some secrets you best steered cleared away from. But they had been drafted in. A back-handed compliment. Each in their own way wondered how the people on the other side of the table dealt with such details on a day to day basis. Seniors in Law Enforcement, Security, Intelligence and The Military. When the chosen had read the reports and closed the folders their spokesperson started.
‘Thank you for your confidence in us. You have our assurance on this, the political side of the equation will not be allowed to be known. We assess there will be documentation to be signed which will make us complicit, each one,’
‘Correct Senator. We on this side of as you say the equation value your understanding, perspective and sense of responsibility to the Nation,’
‘Will we ever meet the planners and executives of this series of strategies?’
‘They will remain to the nation and colleagues, unknown, unremarkable, middle ranking functionaries, albeit ones with a great interest in Constitutional Law, Political and Social History, but those would be seen as parts of their official jobs,’
‘And yet. They spent their true careers thinking The Unthinkable, planning for situations such as these and laying in place strategies within strategies, having to shift and alert with varying political climes. Incredible that it worked so well,’
‘As we understand it, the basis has been in place for some One Hundred and Fifty years. The vital stability of the nation, the inviolability of the cohesion of the federal system as laid down in the Constitution. It has been utilised on a few occasions, although not to this extent. This was indeed one whole year in the detail planning,’
‘How could you be sure of the loyalty and co-operation of all staff on the ground?’
‘There had been that previous year of sifting through those whose loyalty was to the administration and not The Constitution. They were, one way or another neutralised or isolated. The details are in Appendix K,’
‘A mighty endeavour indeed. Some might argue a coup. Some romantics a conspiracy. But then these would not be realists. And of course, the viability and stability of a state can only be continued by realism. A shame about the number of deaths and lives ruined, but there again had this been an invasion by an outside power all this would have been accepted as a price,’
‘We are glad that the political side of the equation sees things that way,’
‘And we in turn are glad that you who hold so much in the way of, shall we say hardware, did not decide to take over the whole control,’
‘We hand you back The Constitution. Please keep it secure,’
Papers were signed documents secured in safes deep in rooms, within rooms known only to a very few.
There was a brief exchange of words between the political side of the equation.
‘Quite the price paid,’
‘The alternatives would have been so much worse,’
‘We are agreed on that,’
And everyone returned to the business of repairing and instigating the return to the mundane.

The one who had been vice-president did ensure they did not drink much. Too much drink and you could make a careless comment, which would be found out. There were monthly visits from very civil men to ask after the disgraced vice-president’s welfare and chat about that month’s activities. Those monthly reminders. At least those kept the threat of legal charges and imprisonment at bay. This must be going on in a few locations. Once the theoretically second most important person in the USA  did not ask about anyone else. It was all for the best. If they were very lucky everyone would forget about this vice-president, they would become a footnote. What a welcome fate.

Marcia was released. She had not contested the divorce. She could not think much these days. She just wanted it all to stop. A charity found her a part time job and a small apartment in a small, quiet town. All she had to do was register once a month with the local police who treated her civilly enough. She kept herself to herself, grew potted plants and adopted a rescued dog, she cuddled and cried to it a lot. Because she could trust the dog. She would never be involved in any committee or organisation again. It was noted and recorded she never voted again on anything.

Federal funds paid for Agent Raff’s cosmetic surgery and new hairstyle. She was assigned to training. The profile was deemed satisfactorily lower. A woman named simply as ‘Jenny’ agreed with the style and the posting.

Remember. This is only story. A fanciful tale. There is no evidence of anything so outrageous taking place. People simply had enough of the overblown antics taking place and gave up on the administration of the time, going back to more calm times.

The End.

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Footnote: Thanks to Jill Dennison of Filosofa for the series Parent’s (Night)mare

https://wordpress.com/reader/feeds/12093442/posts/5629704699

Being the inspiration for this ‘alternative history’ take on her series.

Escape Velocity Has Been Achieved and Craft Holding (Another Chapter in a Very Irregular Series About One Person’s Approach to Writing)

A while back I took the step of announcing the start of a new writing project

On Outlining A New Writing Venture (A post with no reason other than I was having fun with it)

The exercise was conducted to make sure that having ‘gone public’ I had better well carry on with this venture, there having been numerous other attempts which had faded away. The announcement was a boost to ensure my momentum kept moving to escape velocity. This is problem A Panster will often encounter. The process of not working from a true outline, or several pages of notes, but instead relying on ‘something’ popping into the imagination, or being inspired by the last few hundred words while only having maybe the vaguest of ideas as to where ‘this’ is going. Such an outlook can lead to falling prey to Life’s Daily Distraction or an attack of the Existentialist ‘What Is The Point Of It All’, or worse ‘Oh Heck…I’ve done all this before with different names and locations‘   (More about that problem a little later on)

My dependable notion of ‘Never Waste A Good World Build’ once more came to my aid. The Narrative would be set in the world of my previous trilogy. The fact that I could not decide whether in the Past, Present or Future of the previous trilogy’s setting was at the onset of little consequence at least there was a backdrop. As the narrative progress ‘The Future’ seemed the most suitable, this was made easier by the fact that in this ‘world’ of mine, Time was a flexible quality anyway, and there was the good old dependable ‘Ethereal’ an elemental force which is all things to all folk but woe to those who took it for granted or tried to control or expunge it. In this environment Continuity was not really a problem; and as a bonus enabled me to possibly sneak in the spice of a Hidden or Forbidden History factor. I kept the same Empire, Religion and some of the more powerful agencies as this would be useful for later on as to who was keeping what History from who and naturally for some stalwart characters to uncover ‘Stuff’.   

Maybe it’s because of having strong stalwart women in my life; my wife of 51 years, two daughters, a granddaughter and daughter-in-law that I have always tended to place women at the forefront of my stories (also because it will annoy the heck out of those lesser males who object to strong women). Thus, as I started off, there were another three women being drawn into very unexpected situations, and meeting and bonding, even the rather same types as before; trouble? Not really; at the onset this suggested a link between the previous three books. Descendants? That might be stretching things a bit and requiring a lot of explanations out of character with the previous three central figures. No, what was required here was an element explored in the previous works- The Ethereal as a reactive force drawing certain types of folks together; this gave some of the more dogged lesser characters cause to explore into what was taking place and delve into that ‘Forbidden History’ and of course all reach different conclusions. That could be interesting, all manner of possibilities.

Now what was missing? Oh yes….

As usual I had forgotten a central plot. Yes, my BIG failing, getting so much wound up with the characters that their day to day events become the whole story, and whereas it is fun to write you can’t really expect folk to read an entire book’s worth, not in a fantasy background anyway.

Thus far though plenty of material to weave in….

1.One heir to a throne has to get married soon, two rival houses intending their daughters to be his bride. He is very agitated with the politics and takes a ‘gap’ to clear his head he goes out with a military border patrol; lots more politics there. Suddenly ambushed! Escapes! How will this work out? Will he survive and how will his character develop? (By the way there is an Ethereal link between him and the three central women characters- one that none of them really know about, him least of all. What kind of relationships?) 
2.Somewhere else in the empire a very determined fundamentalist branch of the state religion are working up to a crusade. One fellow in particular. Note, don’t make him a pantomime villain. Give his side of things. Also they HATE the Ethereal. And let us not forget that no group is free from the whimsy of factionalism.
3. Where most of the characters live. Lots of local politics between two princedoms and one independent Dukedom, the latter favoured by the Empire. Also folk lurking in the wings there either barely seen or only thus far mentioned in name.
4. Also there’s The Empire, well a writer can certainly work with An Empire’s shenanigans. 
5. AND – Of course The Ethereal and those forbidden / unknown histories.
6. AND EVEN MORESO – All the ‘stuff’ I mentioned above with the central characters.
7. Not to mention several lesser characters with promise to develop.  And a few loose threads that need tightening.
Also
8, 9 & 10 – As write I don’t know what they are, but they are bound to be lurking around somewhere.

Plenty to work with. In fact so much I detect another trilogy. Too much colour and potential to spoil with a planned layout. In real life Wars and Politics never go to plan. One theme I am using again, the three central characters being swept up in events. Like real Life.  

Also this is a first draft and a writer will know that’s a terrible version. There is plenty to be re-written, replaced, downright ditched. Onward- ever onward. To where I know not.

Gosh, this is fun….
Advice for Writers starting off and New Writers struggling……Keep all those scraps you have written or have buzzing around in your head, you never know when they will come in handy, get it down on paper or ‘doc’ and worry about the finer points later on. 

Out Here. Psychology, Perception and the Weather March #BlogBattle: Shiver

In many a sober volume there is a detached and coherent explanation as to why and how we shiver with fear. Some of them indicate that high levels of adrenaline released into the body during times of extreme situations lead to muscles twitching uncontrollably hence seeming to shake or shiver with fear. There again other works would explain physiological reactions to anxiety can cause your blood to flow less efficiently and, therefore, leave you with chills.

I think about these explanations when on duty at The Pale Place. Everyone knows about The Pale Place. Even so you can be in the most secure location, far from where it holds domain and the idea of that ominous malignant unfathomable presence just being in the same world as you can slither up into your consciousness, implanting the terror like a sudden knife to the back or the chord dropped about your throat slowly tightening  its grip. We’ve all seen the effects. Folk stopping still in mid stride, eyes wide in panic, falling against anything to hold them up, clawing, gasping, weeping, caught in the instant when their defences gave way. Then there are the ones who are simply found, dead either in a desperate attempt to make the overwhelming terror stop or simply and maybe thankfully had their bodies just give up, and shut down.

Now my wife, a Lieutenant in the Civic Safety and Security Force, she’s a solid focused professional with a phlegmatic streak right down that lovely back. Even my war stories don’t seem to worry her. She’s got this great cure for the shakes and shivers, she simply picks up her side arm points in to my head says ‘If it happens it happens honey’ adds ‘poof’ then does the same to her own temple.
What a gal. When she’s around I always end up feeling safe.

In a tour of duty on the frontier with the Pale Place, fatalism will only take you so far. We in the Army’s Frontier Deployment Corps reckon fatalism leads to being too casual, gets you killed or worse, Taken. Some stay sharp like everyday is a training day mixed up with experience the equipment regulation clean and you can hear them mouthing The Litany of Calm but watch out for those who start to do it too rapidly; they are anything but calm.

I prefer the simmering feral rage. Defending my turf. Who were these things to come out of The Nowhere and try and take over our planet? There are enough damn worlds out there for them to park whatever passes for their asses on, without schlepping across the vastness of space to our little back water. I don’t give a screw how hard they are to kill or not knowing what they really look like; if I fire enough ordinance into that Pale opaque stuff they hide behind I reckon a few are going down. It’s not as if they’ve advanced that much this past year or so. And they sure as hell do not like those industrial size flame throwers we have now. I’d love to work one of those, scorching back the land. There’s this real high wavering whine you hear when those dragons are working; that’s the sound of victory that is, and then there’s this sugary smell afterwards. Mind you the smoke can be a pain. All in all though simmering feral keeps you hot and cool at the same time. A natural balance I reckon.

And here I am out here staring out at the wasteland between our fortifications and the wall of substance shifting between light mist and thick fog, colours going dark grey to the sort of mournful white you get on funeral sheets. Currently thinking about the last night spent with my wife. Going over every sweet little detail. Stopping the gloomy thoughts which starting hovering about when you look out at the Pale Place.

There’s the group just finished being trainees, nervous chatter, wide-eyed silence, or those trying their best to show they are tough and can handle it.

‘It’s definitely chilly,’

Someone always remarks about how cold it is ‘Today’. You can never truly be sure if they are talking about the weather or covering up. What makes that piece of judgement difficult is that the temperature is usually low about the Pale Place.

And you wait.

Somewhere far up the left flank there is the sound of weaponry; a little later the thick smell of the flame throwers drifts in with the threads of their smoke. Attention naturally swivels that way, orders snap or cry to concentrate to your front. Whatever is going on Up There is their problem. Keep your eyes fixed on your frontage. Watch for the change in the shades and thickness of the wall. Will do. I also concentrate on the dead tree a middle to long distance there to my right. Currently its dark dead outline is stark like a black marker on white paper, any dulling in that outline could mean a shifting of the mists and that They are moving, it could also mean a trick of the wind. You have to very discerning, particularly when an entire platoon might rely on your call.

That blasted smoke. The one drawback to those magnificent dragons. It’s stinging my eyes, just when I was trying to figure out something about the edges of the tree, my tree. I hope, or wish, or pray, or something that there’s more than one set of eyes on that tree.

Damn but it’s getting cold…..

Job Satisfaction Comes Easy For Some of Us. February #BlogBattle: Expectation

Of late it has been just about the funniest era which I ever witnessed, and in my tenure through the history of The People there have been some truly hilarious ones. Of course, humour is somewhat subjective. and you might not find the end as much of a joke as I would. In this you should give me some leeway for if you had been selected to witness the History of The People and never given even a smidge of a reason as to Why Me or For What Purpose, your perspectives might end up being somewhat, shall we say ‘Different’. Oh, I do envy those who I have encountered who know they have a purpose, even if some of them do make me snigger (but never to their faces, that would be dreadfully rude)

Anyway. It all began during one of those eras when The People had been making progress. As usual the path was ragged, full of holes and mis-directions caused by the fogs of Ambition or Ignorance, but The People were getting there. They’d even formulated rules for warfare, not that those were adhered to much, but as the saying goes ‘It’s The Thought That Counts’

It is possible, just possible the Big Cause was all those sort of wars, which weren’t the big proper ones but the small snippy ones which may have given rise to the dissatisfaction. Because aside from getting killed or maimed or having someone close to you killed or maimed no one likes have explosions near to their homes, and even if there are no near explosions no one likes having to pay out for or do without because of some faraway war. Am I right? Yes I am, I’ve been around long enough. Now apart from blaming those in charge whether they deserved it or not, another thing folk will always do is blame others who although had been living thereabout for a few generations, but if the majority didn’t think them proper natives they got part of the blame. Seems a bit unfair, but folk hate having their Expectations foiled, and doing without or losing folk close to them, or worse losing the war; does tend to make them grumpy and irrational. And to make it even more funny, even if the war was over and they might have won it, they were still unhappy about This and That, even if This and That didn’t really impinge on them.

Now folks of The People who are grumpy like that get really cross because they never stop to think about how they could stop the grumpiness by just be grateful with what they had and letting others live likewise. This is where it gets to be really funny. What do they do? Do they work hard to try and make things better? Nnnnnooooh! They go and look for someone who has got very little idea on how to be constructive and who thinks that pulling things down or picking on different folk is the best way to run a nation, never mind if that person couldn’t even organise an orgy in a Place of Pleasure, never mind if they are only interested in themselves, and their group. Folk start to chose them because they talk the Talk folks want to hear, not The Talk that folk ought to listen to. I’ve heard it so many times, I tell you it is sssoooo funny because what’s going to happen is obvious.

The Folk that put The Rulers there do not get their Expectations fulfilled. Thousands of years re-run and back-run and it still happens. Ooooh y’ just gotta giggle. This People! Sorry about the loss of dictation there, but it gets funnier. Wait I’ll compose myself.

There that’s better. Now what happens next is what with all the Expectations not getting fulfilled The People start hitting each even more than usual and burning down the places they live, play and shop in. Yes that’s right? Smash up your hometown makes you feel better. What a hoot. But it gets even funnier, unbelievable right? No, listen here, all these folk who are upset at the ways things are going and complaining no one listens to them, what do they do next. Oh this is good. You’ll like this. They put into power a person or group of persons who take so much control that no one gets to do what they like. Of course it takes a while for the sillies to realise that, but by then it’s too twiddling late! They are stuck with it, while the ones at the top are skimming off the cream and the only danger they have is from each other. All The People doing it.

At this point the leaders having got everyone under control get cross with other leaders because they don’t see their point of view, which is a bit silly because there’s more than one way to run a country right? They just can’t see that. There’s those that reckon very rich folk being allowed to shake down the ordinary folk is the way. Others say no and they do the opposite and they say The State knows best, so no one is allowed to be rich, except the leaders but not so that you’d notice. Meanwhile some say the answer is that if you decide everything is done a religious way then all will be good, and those who don’t believe your way are bad; the leaders reckon they will get to save their god the trouble and they kill the not-believing folk. There are some rulers mix all sorts of different ways to rule, and those are really amusing because they allow folk to vote; the way they are told that is.

This goes on for a while, then the Grumpiness reaches a high level, folk starting hitting folk who work for the Rulers and breaking things belonging to The Rulers. That’s when the Governments do the same back to them to say how they like it. The folk don’t, and reckon another country has got it right, which means every government sets up groups of grumpies in other governments’ lands, and there is lots of hitting, and wars, which get a bit bigger. What used to happen was that eventually everyone would either get fed up of the war or there wouldn’t be many left to send off to get killed or maimed, so everything would settle down. Until the next one that is.

This time it was all of The People All of The Time. In the shape of a war which was very, very, very long and big. All the leaders had plans and expectations but none of those worked out and there was so much damage and loss of life that it looked like folk wouldn’t make it through. Well I could have told them that, for once I did try to in different disguises but The People  were so mixed up they just threw things at me, or tried to have me executed, which naturally never worked. I just said ‘Well spoofle to you,’ then. ‘I know what’ll happen next,’

Yes, they started to run out of not just of the sophisticated stuff they began to mess up the basics of food, shelter and even weaponry. In the case of the latter they had to start to stab each with stick and throw stones or if they were really strong and co-operative hurl big rocks. What was another bit of chucklesome was that they’d lost all the ways of making farming work, and how to hunt without being killed, and thus they decided all what was left was to eat each other. Yes, that’s right. Can you believe it? Of course that led to a lot of creeping about, leaping out on each other, knocking head and stabbing bodies but they kept enough sense to prepare and cook properly. The wars just declined to simply that creeping and crawling followed by leaping out to kill and then munch.

Here’s where the laughable lesson comes in, since Folk were so busy killing and eating each other and those were their only expectations the rest of Life began to recover and some it seeing as how The People were not that strong or swift, lots of Life preyed on them. Oh my, but that is HILARIOUS  to watch!

‘Enough Sister. Enough. What you are describing is a terrible tragedy. It is nothing to laugh at. All that potential wasted. All that suffering. If you could not have handled it yourself you should have called out to us,’

‘Huh! Says you Brother. Why should I have troubled you? You had your own tasks and you had been told or given enough clues to learn yours. You were all busy. It was not right to distract you from your Folk,’

‘But Sister. Had you not thought to reach out? Truly you should have known you could not have been left alone to observe a People and final grow so weary as to find the whole process amusing. Surely you should have realised that was not expected of you?’

‘Dear Sister did you not discern earlier on that the is not the first time I have discussed my situation with Brother or Sister? See how our Brother shakes his head. I see you Brother, you may look and sound different, but I sense you. We have conversed before, and you could not change me then either. For I was never told to do aught but observe by those Unseen. If you ever met them then I am glad for you. Not for me. Not my duty. Not for These People. What else was there to expect? Did I not tell you I did try but they would not listen, and thus, soon they will be gone. All that talent, all that potential, all those gifts, wasted because they thought being simplistic and intolerant was still a good idea. Now that is something to laugh at. A warning within a joke. Truly Sister and Brother I tell you Irony has the Final Say, or maybe Nature. still working on that point. Anyways I bid you both well and would have you return to your own allotted and worthy tasks,’

And turned my back on them which might have been just a bit rude, but since this was my patch of Creation there was not much they could do about it. I was never convinced by their ethics and since The Unseen was or were not telling me otherwise that was that. Still since I have very low expectations in that area I don’t worry about it.

I have this new amusement now, sitting out of sight of The People; there are still a few millions of them about the place and I am throwing small stones at their heads. They yelp, jump up and glare around then picking up a big stick go rushing off in what direction they thought the stone came from. Meanwhile I’ve done the same to another one. As expected they crash into each other; well you can guess the rest. They’d be hitting each other anyway; I might as well get a few extra chortles out of the business.

Some day they will have all died out. By then I will have manufactured a great big plinth and upon that will be inscribed.

‘Here lie a People who could have been so much but instead fell to the call of Terminal Stupidity’.

At that stage I expect I will find out whether I did a good job or not.

Changes of Circumstances and Opportunities-January #BlogBattle- Familiar

Perrik Jek looked up from his work bench, or desk, depending on what he was doing. A cat had leapt up upon it and sat there solemnly viewing him.
‘Sorry,’ said Perrik ‘The Guv’nor doesn’t work with familiars. Not required in his line of work,’
The arrival’s head lowered. Being correctly identified and rejected in one sentence could be quite disappointing.
‘You’ve not heard my references yet,’
Perrik was not a hard-hearted fellow, for he too had known the tough side of Life, but facts was facts. He set down his quill and apexed his hands. This would be a diversion from the maths that weren’t adding up.
‘You might have good ones. I’m not denying you don’t. You might have a most impressive list of contacts and associates,’ his eyes went ceilingward ‘Up there,’ then his tone lowered ‘Or,’ as did his thumb ‘down there,’ a shrug ‘My Guv’nor don’t care. He doesn’t get involved in that line of thought. He’s all about the maths,’
The feline shape down descended into a despondent hunch.
‘It’s true then,’ continued Perrik ‘There has been a falling off in the need for familiars,’
‘I blame those populist sort of daemons,’ came the forlorn response ‘You don’t get the class you used to. Had to work hard for your client to get an audience with The Spectral Folk, they were very particular. And there’s the knowing which ones were the recommended one. It’s no use matching your business inclined sort with a spirit of The Woods now is there? A right clash of cultures that would be. And wouldn’t do your reputation any good with either side,’ the feline head shook sadly in a human manner ‘There was an air of class, there was. Then along came modern times, all these mechanical inventions, polluting up the ether. And the quality Spectral Folk, they wouldn’t put up with that. No, they started to move off to other plains, for beyond our reach,’ the voice dropped to a whisper ‘Some in the trade reckon they’ve dropped old ethical divides and started up a whole new set of outlooks, which is why we can’t reach them. So what happens? Along come those cheap rate populist types. Horns on their heads, tongues hanging out, no sense of common decency. Lazy approach to summoning, letting any idiot with a shaven head and comic robes call them and not through the proper channels. And for what? A lot of rowdy capering. We don’t want to get involved it that. Those populists, they bring along their own nasty little servants; trying to be physical with you, or eat you, or both. A hard working, decent familiar does not want to get involved with that. Do they now?’
Perrik had always found it best to let someone aggrieved with their current status to have their say and deflate down, then get a word in edgeways. Particularly familiars. If you got them annoyed they could hide themselves into all sorts of places and mutter away for days. Of course, the Guv’nor would not be happy having his mathematical concentrations on calculations and incantations interrupted with mutterings. Perrik would have had to find the disgruntled familiar and chase them out, which he would have to do in his meal, leisure and sleep time allotments of course. He put on his best sympathetic air.
‘Oh I see, all your centuries of working up contacts, ways, means and general empathetic interfacing has been made redundant?’
He’d never seen a feline face look mournful before. He got up from his seat.
‘Least I can do is give you some time by the fire and a bit of lunch. We’ve got some mince. It’s the Guv’nor y’see. He tends to the simple, It’s his aesthetic,’
The familiar coughed, Perrik guessed it was stifling an actual purr. Hazards of the dual personas he supposed.

Perrik was just serving up the meal on a metal platter when Master Mackveylan Purveyor of Knowledge appeared and naturally scowled.
‘I thought there was something of interference upon the Second Oculator. Jek why are you hosting this feline, which is evidently not a feline?’
Perrik had to give the familiar their due, they simply licked a paw, turned their attention upon the mince while purring loudly and as all cats can do, ignored the new arrival as unimportant to the business to hand. Good composure and role play, he thought.

Mackveylan (Purveyor of Knowledge) was not so easily put off.
‘You know the rules full and well Jek. No familiars. Otherwise I am surprised that you should be taken in so. The Second Oculator is ever accurate,’
Perrik did not think it wise to mention last Winter Tyde unfortunate incident with the pound of sausages. His Guv’nor was very sensitive on that score and it would not help matters. He would try another tact, after all pride in his street heritage demanded it of him, that and the appearance of a creeping sense to do with survival.
‘Oh yes Master Mackveylan. Oh yes. And normally I would agree, but there seem to be circumstances which you could call extenuating. Now from my background Guv’nor I’ve heard most variations on the theme of ‘stringing someone along’, and can tell a spinner twenty paces off,’ he stroked the feline back, there was another purr. ‘This one has come with accounts from the other side. The one which doesn’t bother with maths,’

Mackveylan drew himself up to quite noticeable height in a stance of authority and an expression of determination.
‘Everything,’ he said in his stentorian way ‘Has to defer to Mathematics my dear Perrik,’
The familiar turned its head from the now empty platter and gave Mackveylan a look which Perrik could only define as irritation of a pitying sort, then settled down into one of those curled crouches cats adopted when about to do something quick and unexpected. Quite uncaring about the disapproving glare Mackveylan was visiting upon it. Perrik was used to this look which always worked upon customers, idlers and the occasional rival who crossed paths with the Guv’nor, the familiar however was not taking any notice and Perrik suspected the Guv’nor might not know what to do next.
‘Dispose of it immediately,’ the words sounded as if they brimmed with authority, however Perrik was sceptical. It was not like The Guv’nor to delegate major tasks, when he was offended, he would resorted to one of his devices. But The Guv’nor always left the expulsion of familiars to him. Apparently they were considered vermin and thus not worthy of his attention. It was all there in the tone.
The familiar stiffened.
And the door blew in.
Standing there was a human sized rodent shaped being, how tall Perrik couldn’t say as it was affecting a hunch, and what might be a toothy leer. It was dressed in rags, well by Perrik’s keen eye not proper rags, not real street worn and genuine filth caked rags, these were the sort rich folk wore when they went to beggar themed parties. The smell was pretty awful though. It’s attention was all on Mackveylan, and it spoke in a scratchy high pitch.
‘I am Skreeeee-Pitch-Twip. Faithful servant of the Great Lord Squeeee-Skitter-Skacmper-Hissss. And I am here on a commission from Humerdin Ganpdu, who hasth made a fearful pact with us The Host Beneath The Streets,’
Despite the shock of the entrance and the actually disturbing sight Perrik could not help but feel he was at an exhibition of bad acting.
‘Humerdin Ganpdu,’ echoed Mackveylan ‘That fourth-rate trickster,’
The rodent thing made a peculiar tittering noise, Perrik assumed laughter
‘His status in your dim eyes matters not, for he had paid for us to dispose of you. And thus we propereth,’
The creature hunched more and advanced claws outstretched.
‘This cannot be. This is a mathematical nonsense,’ objected Mackveylan ‘Begone,’ and he produced an ornate device of bright metal in the shape one of the new gunpowder pistols, it buzzed, sparks flew out of the barrel, it hummed, then sighed and stopped. Mackveylan was then astonished, then dismayed.
The creature advanced, Perrik made to pick up a chair and see if a heavy thwack on the back of its head might do something. If they survived this there would definitely have to be a great deal of reappraisal.
The familiar still crouched began to grow in size, at a rapid pace too, until it should have taken up most of the room but none of the items seemed affected. Silently it leapt upon the rodent thing, caught it in its mouth, threw it up into the air and when it landed batted it about the forepaws for a while, then bit into its neck. The creature’s only contributions to the business had been a lot of frightened squealing. After the bite this had stopped, both parties shrank back to the conventional size of the animals they affected to imitate, the familiar dinning on the body.
Perrik had been involved catching his Guv’nor who had fainted. While propping him up Perrik tried to process what was taking place. The familiar looked at him.
‘Oh don’t look so pale. This is all allegorical. What I am actually doing in using a spell to despatch this creature back to the sub-plane it normally resides in. This is a poor state of affairs if you’ve got an infestation of The Host Beneath The Streets, they are not very impressive really, except when there are lots of them. Wouldn’t have happened in the old days,’ there was a shaking of the feline head ‘What I was telling you about wasn’t it?’ another shake, and the remains of the rodentish creature vanished.
Perrik examined the prone and shocked into silence figure of his Guv’nor, considered the recent events and looked to the familiar, who sat looking at him.
‘Don’t go away,’ he said.
Several ideas were orbiting within his mind, but he thought he had best have a healer of good reputation to see to his Guv’nor. He sent a lad out with a message, extra coins to speed the boy on his way.

Very shortly, the doughty talkative but very expert Mistress Fainsbutton bustled in with her bag of potions, pills, salves and bandages.
‘Oh my young Jek. Your master. I say, what a day it has been,’ being a lady of some build she lifted up Mackveylan, with some aid from Perrik and setting him on a bed examined the stupefied fellow ‘Hmm. Yes, he’ll recover. Anyway. Such events are happening. Apparently that charlatan Humerdin Ganpdu had been gathering a cabal of folk of equally negligible  talent and worth and have been summoning fel creatures that no one thought really existed. It seems they were intent on removing erstwhile folk such as your Master and seize control of the city. And yet it came to naught, the creatures vanished while at the same time the heads of every member of this onerous gang fell off. What do you think of that?’
Perrik Jek looked to the feline form seated casually at the bedroom door, assiduously cleaning its paws.
‘Extraordinary Mistress Fainsbutton. Extraordinary. Now if you see to the Guv’nor I have to go down and tidy up,’
As a matter of experience and pride someone up from the streets should always be aware of opportunities and this day’s revelations to Perrik’s mind were certainly offering up a few.
The feline form followed him down the stairs

‘You’re hired,’ Perrik said to them ‘We’ll sort out terms, conditions and suchwhich later on. Dignified to your status of course,’
‘What about you Guv’nor?’
‘Once I’ve explained to him why I have solved the mystery concerning a particular pound of sausages, he’ll see sense,’

Incepto ne Desistam. A Pantser’s Motto?

Ok, I admit the title might be a bit of pretension, and no I am not classical trained. The snippet of Latin which translates as – ‘May I Not Shrink From My Purpose’ is simply a case of In Google I Trust. (And used in the hope that no Latin scholars will chance upon this and have grounds for pointing out my error in usage)  That said a Pantser should never shrink from appropriating stuff out of the Public Domain, short of blatant plagiarism that is, of course.

The reasons for aforementioned appropriation, its justification and then strident qualifier will come as no surprises to any Veteran and also Proud Panster. We who work with the barest of threads or the smidge-est of ideas for a plot, if we start with one at all, and thence aware of the perils of the journey which lies ahead proceed, boldly, carelessly, doggedly, anarchically, irreverently and other associated adverbalies all the while intent on reaching a conclusion.

Well we will have an idea of what we are going to write about. Some sort of reason or imagery. Maybe even the ending, or what we might think will be the ending, This faint image will fade like mists in sunny Spring Morn’s under a growing glare of circumstances.

At some stage you hope Characters will start tell you the way you are going about the business is simply not going to work and you should listen to them. However herein does lie one of the issues a Pantser might well have to confront on a regular or in extreme cases a daily basis, being The Characters insisting they known best. ‘Here’s what is going to happen, now you just be a good little wordsmith and write a few hundred words on the scene or plot twist. No, we’re not going to tell you how, that’s your job,’ At this stage you zone out to your family, friends and maybe some of your allotted time at the job you would rather not be doing while you wander the foggy lands of your imagination and writing skills trying to find a way through. 

Whereas I personally grimly indulge in taking up the challenge, it is understood this can be unnerving for someone relatively new to the process. Having a character mentally nudge you just before you drift off in nightly slumbers, or wake you up at some variable time, then leave you wondering ‘What?’ and resisting the urge to slither out of bed to sit vacantly at a laptop or blank paper is not really conducive to the creative process. I wonder if this is the true reason behind the sudden demise of a few major characters part way through some novels.

With all of this in mind here is something of an account which as is my custom is an intention either to be a warning or an ‘Ah. Not just me then,’ to any readers who are also embarking or struggling with a project.

Back in 2021 my previous trilogy came to a conclusion, and of course my creative side was wondering where to go next. Firstly there was a thought ‘Well you could do a follow up….Like twenty years on?’. I pitched an opening draft (or three) to the central characters of the previous work. They weren’t very enthusiastic. ‘It’s not just that we are happy with retirement Rog’. To be brutal we can tell your heart and imaginative whizz-bang is not in this’ Trelli being the most level-headed of the three as always is very forth-right while usually being polite.

Thus I examined various formats in the Fantasy  / Sci-Fi genres and relevant possible plot lines ranging from the irreverently comic to the lightly serious. The Fantasy outlines were all rooted in the world of the Trilogy (Never waste a good World Build ), Past, Present of Future but I could not get Characters who were interested in the plot lines. Some were dissatisfied that I was not going with a true Rom-Com while others were more intent on turning entire chapters into Shakespearean soliloquies or 19th Century Russian novel reflection on Life. Also the more action inclined folk were complaining about hanging around having a couple of paragraphs of sword waving while waiting for the possible true battles somewhere ‘up the road’. And none of the aforementioned sides were happy with the time given over to those who indulged in lecturing on geo-political realism. 

There was an interlude when basing the tales in a Sci-Fi setting showed promise. I am fascinated in the Quantum Mechanics concept of the 11 dimensions in String Theory, and wondered about with this as the basis for practical interstellar travel in days thus getting around that faster than light ‘thing’ . You travelled through the 11 dimensions. Great idea? Well in my excitement I missed the obvious 12th Dimension – A Creditable Plot, all I had were folk aimlessly mooching about a empire wide set up doing quirky things. Anyway the true Quantum Mechanics theories were nothing like what I had in mind. The format might have been Pantsing but not really rewarding Pantsing. More like a TV ‘Soap into ‘that’ season when the audience knows the writers have run out of quality ideas. 

And yet still, there was the persistence to write another work or series of works. True to Panster’s code, having no plot and no characters would be poor excuses for not writing. What was required was some need to kick-start. This arose in a naturally sideways manner from the need to use my Netflix subscription and thus by chance watching two series of animated story lines based on computer games. The fine level character development and attention to plots held me to repeat viewings. Happily nothing has been appropriated from these but the experiences did stir me into thinking up all sorts of combinations of people, places and events, based in my precious world-build. Encouraged somewhat by something which might ‘develop’ I then indulged in one of my naughtier ploys as used in Writing Prompt challenges. This was to listen to audio book versions of respected and revered works of Fantasy Fiction and intersperse the narrative with my own irreverent observations or additions to put me into my writing mood, Yes, I know it’s not dignified or mature but Pantsers reserve the right to utilise the ‘Works for Me’ approach.   

Thus the project commenced with a few characters who had been hanging around for a while but never cared much for the scripts given to them. This time satisfied with the initial scenarios and basic directions they set to work content to veer off script as they saw fit. The modest hub-bub attracted other folk who had previously told me ‘They’d let me know’ and gradually one of those communities of characters essential to the tradition of Heroic Fantasy began to accumulate. At this stage there was the general debate about which way the plot and sub-plots might develop, fortunately there was an agreement that there would have to be one central theme with room for differing narratives to work through. Everyone was of the belief that if it was going to be Heroic there would have to be some sort of conflict. Adoption of the nascent natural element The Ethereal was enthusiastically approved of as its evasive nature allowed for all sorts of liberties to be taken with Time, Place and Rationale, strict adherence to Continuity being a bit of a trial. 

As the work reached the 10,000th word passage I felt sufficiently confident enough to release a public notification this launch might have potential.

On Outlining A New Writing Venture (A post with no reason other than I was having fun with it) 

This bold step taken there was no option but to continue.

Now I have passed the 20,000 word stage. Characters are settling into their roles, back stories are starting to form and I have the outline of a plot, of course this will not survive contact with the main characters and the support characters more than capable of effecting a change. Whether the Whole evolve into more than one volume is something which is quite beyond current forecasting. All that truly matters is ‘It’s On Its Way’

What more could a Pantser ask for?

On Outlining A New Writing Venture (A post with no reason other than I was having fun with it)

Sailing ShipOnwards, ever onwards (actually this sailing scene has nothing to do with the plot, but is a great allegorical device)

‘Tis said one picture is worth a thousand words. Thus in committing myself to this venture here is the outline of a basis for a story line…. with pictorial aids:

Set in the north central lands of the Oakhostian Empire:Confusing map That’s a Fantasy World Build Map???…Seriously???…….Yeah, looks like someone spilt coffee over a pizza with toppings.

In the small dukedom of independent Westerlythane, Grand Duke Alveraine’s youngest and studious daughter Lady Loryhana

Young Woman writing has been charged by her father to categorise and collect where necessary the affects of the recently deceased solitary, mysterious fellow Master Morovach,

Mysterious also known as The Great Exile and long had been given sanctuary in Westerlythane
This she dutifully accomplishes, while taking into her private possession a set of somewhat old and captivating tomes….
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Meanwhile to the south in the Princedom of Olfreg (working title) handsome, genial heir to the land
Merklin Silc screenshot Frendlehanz must by tradition and princedom’s law marry before his 27th birthday. Rival ducal houses of the princedom are vying for him to chose one of their daughter.  With one and a half years to go for all sorts of complex reasons he must either chose between…
Alluring, vivacious and ambitious

Alluring  Lady Sielimdea of Ducal House Helbruchs

Or winsome, child of nature

Child of NatureAuroreya of the House Veredales

Even though he has dallied with both he is not very enthusiastic about sharing a life with either. Flustered by the whole thing, he resolves to clear his head by meeting up with austere military minded Lord Vulstrum
Untitled design - 1Who doesn’t actually know Frendlehanz, socially that is, and with no real idea what the heck the heir to the princely throne wants visiting up in his father’s small bleak dukedom.

Meanwhile…

In the rugged land of Thanbarch, north of Westerlythane and perennial foes of Olfreg,    Jerial Jerial daughter of ClanLord Crinach has been exiled in a benevolent sort of way to outpost duty as she caused a battlefield problem by acting as if she was a Captain and not deferring to her brother. Where she has been posted unbeknown to her or her family is a place of the Elemental Ethereal:

Ethereal

All these seemingly unconnected events have come to the attention of several folk or parties. Initially one investigator into and then purveyor of information concerning The Ethereal… Master Presvell

Presvell

Aided by his loyal servant Gealeva of alley and gutter heritage

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Who together set out on a journey to the various lands wherein reside the previously mentioned characters.

On their trail and that of the Ethereal Manifestation is one doughty foe of evil,  the more dangerous heresies and also reviled by most of his brethren- Custodian Laverlake

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In their wake will come various really unpleasant folk, twisted custodians, professional thieves, ruthless nobles and other unsavoury folk

Everyone of the above are or will come under the eye of the Empire’s State Within a State – The LifeGuard.

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I can’t really say how many of these will be principals,  or those who will just have walk on parts or simply be set up for something to happen to them. There will of course be some hideous creatures and maybe one or a few unhinged dabblers in forbidden knowledge. Their appearances will depend upon the plot which as yet remains unfix’d and as usual in my experience will take form at the behest or whim of those characters who have an interest in influencing the writer.

Whether there will be more than one volume is something I would not, at this stage, possibly comment on.

But I have gone public on this particular start up (17th for the record), so I shall have to stick with it won’t I?

Writers: On The Risk of, Maybe Packing Too Much Into A Project

After the sixteenth (or was it the seventeenth?) attempt at launching a new project there was a great temptation to indulge in the traditional Indy / Indie writer’s angst of episodic lamentations and cries of ‘ What is the point of it all’ and thence gloomy introspection.

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However, it is also the curse / blessing within the Indy / Indie writer to be a’fix(ed) with the urge and need to keep on writing, and seek ever beyond the horizon fulfilment of that next, and in my case evasive big project. There’s six of the efforts marking up to roughly 100,000 words which are still archived in case there’s a need to ‘Copy & Paste’ useful chunks. And there is a new one which is tottering on the launch pad. You would think that with a pretty strong World Build there would be no shortage of material, inspiration and plot lines, so how come just ‘Might Have Beens’?

win_20210522_11_00_43_pro…Ponder….ponder…..ponder

On referring back to the previous trilogy….

It occurred to me amongst the total of 660,000 + words, aside from the traditional World Build, adventurous quests or tasks, conflicts and challenges set to three strong characters, the array of minor and not so minor characters with their own tales to tell there were a great deal of other themes and sub-plots which had found their ways in. Out of this grew the comic interludes, satires on common themes in fantasy novels, whole commentaries on various cultures and locations, parodies on traditional villain types, parallel realities, romances, personal sacrifices, allegories with various historical military blunders, the construction of an imperial administration and its agencies, threads which went in various directions and managed to tie up, entire family lives, one rather massive risk of a plot twist and a small tough ragged horse which travelled through realities without any explanation given. Along with some other stuff to do with lesser characters just put in because I felt like it suited the whole canvas, like my predilection to weave in John LeCarre style machinations of various government agencies simply for atmosphere.    

 And dear reader one has to ask ones’ self as you might. Was all of that necessary? In my defence, at the time it seemed so. When reading / listening to my favourite subject of military history as must be the case with other historical studies, there is encountered the factor of the importance of the small folk, not the Great and Influential, for without the small folk what would the Great and Influential achieve? Then there is the ‘Grit In The Machine’ factor which in the way of many a Grand Strategy, the overlooked seemingly inconsequential yet important item, the events of the second book hinged on such a quantity. These had, I reckoned, to be taken into account. And also how the events affected folks’ lives, motivations and own plans. Of course all and everything was necessary and fitted.

The problem with ‘Of Course’s being one might fit one type of book, ie factual history but might not work in a fictional setting, and that most important of persons, the reader could lose interest and particularly in Heroic Fantasy be looking for more dramatic interludes linking into one magnificent conclusion. Maybe.

I could of course cite the works of David Gemmel who would take minor and sometimes grimy characters and through the narrative elevate them, often against their will to major players. Brandon Sanderson and Joe Abercrombie are of the type of writer who populate their books with large lists of lesser characters who come and go through the narrative, sometimes returning when you least expect them and playing for maybe only a short while a vital role. They, Abercrombie in particular do not go in for Happy or Cleanly Ethical endings, which can be argued are most realistic. Me, I do veer towards clean, just and tidy endings, and the intention to do so without a Deux Machina (or several) might, just might have had an effect upon the whole narrative, for whereas I only had the haziest of ideas about the rest of the narrative that sort of ending  was a given. 

I could stand by all those decisions and maintain them by the dogged outlook beloved of a more stubborn sort of Indy / Indie writer summed up as ‘So what? If you don’t like It…Tough. It’s My Book’ . Somehow that might be avoiding the issue.

Is the reason why a new project is not taking off, because I have used up all my good ideas, scenarios, situations, themes and sub-plots? And will anything else be just repetition? There is an ‘Of Course’ there too. Since my work to date has had little to no success and in consequence a double edged truth would be; ‘Who would notice? Or care?’ . Now where that ties in with or contradicts the previous ‘So what? If you don’t like It…Tough. It’s My Book’ is another topic for debate. 

Thus having paused to muse over the whole business while doing my turn at the washing up and washing loading duties, I was left to conclude…… Was I taking ‘pantsing’ too far? Should I have laid out all of the ideas which came to mind and put some to one side for another day? Should I have edited the books into shorter volumes and instead of three weighty tomes have had six, or seven, or eight smaller volumes and attracted an audience who prefer shorter books with cliff-hangers? Did I cram far too much in. Truth be known from time to time the thought of dismantling all three, starting from scratch and taking that approach has occured….But…Ah me, the effort, seemed too much were I say thirty years younger…..

My advice then for anyone starting out, is by all means dive in and rattle away, letting your ideas flow like rivers, and the first drafts (there are always several) be a hodge-podges of all sorts of stuff, but then maybe step back and consider whether there is more than one book there, or maybe there should be more than one book there, which in turn will lead to more books.   

Maybe it is the genre…Fantasy…. Maybe we all would like to be a Tolkien and feel we have out own private Lord of The Rings simmering away. Maybe we should not give way to that lure. I can’t comment on Martin’s Ice and Fire series, they never appealed to me, but I would guess the same sort of conclusion would apply.

Anyway, the muses are tugging, the collection of characters might well have the inclination to nag at me to get going and shove a whole lot of their own ideas onto my table. Who knows, maybe this time I will get past the 75,000 word barrier and start to really once more have fun writing, and perhaps a bit of restraint?

Who can tell what lies beyond the next paragraph?